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Old 07-03-2008, 04:48 AM   #1
emily.ily9
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poem. comments loved.

scribbled this out two minutes ago...

mirror
today, i forgot what i look like.
going through old photos for the
first time,
i saw myself as an outsider,
through a stranger's eyes. and what i saw
surprised me so much
i had no choice but to stop and stare at the
foreigner laid out before me,
in familiar situations,
but with a face i didn't recognize.
i saw a brilliant, loving smile,
facial expressions that
made me burst out laughing,
calm, beautiful eyes.
i looked on
and i found
stunning vitality, grace.
a person i would like to meet and befriend.
someone who could make my life
more than it is.

it took a sunny day to find an objective eye.


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everything's coming up roses.

no more fear. no more fear!


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Old 12-03-2008, 08:41 PM   #2
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can't believe i haven't seen this one before.
love this.
love love love this.
emily i am so glad we discovered eachother.




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Old 12-03-2008, 10:12 PM   #3
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Aww :)
I really like it.
Very nicely done ^_^
Keep up the good work
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Old 13-03-2008, 02:33 AM   #4
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can't believe i haven't seen this one before.
love this.
love love love this.
emily i am so glad we discovered eachother.
TRUTH!



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