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Old 15-10-2010, 04:25 PM   #1
little mermaid
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tentative love poem.

at night sometimes
your heart beats hard, I feel it in my bones.
I press my ribs into your chest
and I hope this is my home.
the rhythm, like a lullaby
perfect pounding, keeping time
until it is impossible
to know which beat is yours and which is mine.




Blessing all the birds that died so I could live
be a woman, be a woman


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Old 18-10-2010, 06:29 PM   #2
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I think this is lovely. I've liked all of your poems that I've seen I think.
Particularly the last 4 lines. Really beautiful.

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Old 18-10-2010, 08:05 PM   #3
Drella
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Thats beautiful(:



It didn't matter in the end how old they had been, or that they were girls,
but only that we had loved them and that they hadn't heard us calling,
still do not hear us calling them from out of those rooms where they went to be alone for all time,
and where we will never find the pieces to put them back together.


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Old 18-10-2010, 08:24 PM   #4
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I think this is really lovely.



Given enough tea I could rule the world.


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