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25-06-2007, 10:03 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Somewhere over the rainbow...
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This Poem
This poem has no rhythm,
This poem has no rhyme,
But still it is
The best that I
Could achieve this time.
This poem has no structure,
This poem has no form,
The writing's bad and messy,
The paper's ripped and torn.
And since the above two stanzas
Were far too formed and normal
I think the final verse should be
Completely off the wall.
This poem has no hopigerosingeria['
This poem has no 'pgtjne'gne'gnmgg
But still I think this poem
Is very npiwan;oiernge;ro.
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For what it's worth it was worth all the while. I hope you had the time of your life...
I can see you're sad, even when you smile, even when you laugh; I can see it in your eyes, deep inside you want to cry
~ ddoouubbllee lleetttteerr tthhrreeaaddeerr
~ honourary emma
~ honourary katY [Kat*Y* with a *Y* Club]
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25-06-2007, 10:05 PM
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#2
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*First Aid Advisor*
Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Narnia
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haha i like it.
And the last verse reminds me of Dr. Suess. 
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Eva. Gone, but never forgotten 27.3.10
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25-06-2007, 10:12 PM
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#3
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Somewhere over the rainbow...
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Thanks 
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For what it's worth it was worth all the while. I hope you had the time of your life...
I can see you're sad, even when you smile, even when you laugh; I can see it in your eyes, deep inside you want to cry
~ ddoouubbllee lleetttteerr tthhrreeaaddeerr
~ honourary emma
~ honourary katY [Kat*Y* with a *Y* Club]
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26-06-2007, 06:27 PM
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Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: US
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Your poem put a smile on my face.
=]
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26-06-2007, 06:30 PM
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will scarlett forever <3
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: london
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haha that's really cool
the last verse made me laugh (i don't laugh often)
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<3 doing it for my friends <3
<3 doing it for God <3
doing it for ME
i CAN do this
nine months without self-harm
XD
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27-06-2007, 10:58 AM
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#6
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Somewhere over the rainbow...
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Good, it made me smile that you guys like it.
One of my best friends was reading my other poems and didn't like them because they're depressive so she told me to write her a happy poem...so this was my attempt.
Thanks for commenting.
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For what it's worth it was worth all the while. I hope you had the time of your life...
I can see you're sad, even when you smile, even when you laugh; I can see it in your eyes, deep inside you want to cry
~ ddoouubbllee lleetttteerr tthhrreeaaddeerr
~ honourary emma
~ honourary katY [Kat*Y* with a *Y* Club]
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27-06-2007, 11:03 AM
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Princess Suicide
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Durham - UK
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yea it have o agree it made me giggle and i havent done much that this week as i broke my finger and is still in pain with it lol
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Princess Suicide
Grrrrrrrrr i hate girls in my class i wish they would all go to hell 
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27-06-2007, 12:03 PM
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Dare To Believe
Join Date: Jun 2007
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Love it! Great poem! lol
xxxxx
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QK <3
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27-06-2007, 04:04 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Somewhere over the rainbow...
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I'm glad I've been making you people smile...
Keep smiling - you know you want to
Take care.
xxxxx
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For what it's worth it was worth all the while. I hope you had the time of your life...
I can see you're sad, even when you smile, even when you laugh; I can see it in your eyes, deep inside you want to cry
~ ddoouubbllee lleetttteerr tthhrreeaaddeerr
~ honourary emma
~ honourary katY [Kat*Y* with a *Y* Club]
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