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Old 14-03-2011, 03:14 AM   #1
little mermaid
clamshells for castinettes.
 
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poem.

I left my heart in late november,
to be reclaimed sometime next year
I slept alone all that december,
keeping warm with tights and beer
staying up til sunrise
chain-smoking on the pier
and driving up and down the beach
just me and the moon and the deer
staring blankly from the sidewalks
with their babies close behind
and I'd think how strange it would have been
if I'd been able to keep mine
and if you were sitting next to me
looking pretty on my passenger side
would you complain about the music,
and make me turn it down
would you have been annoyed with me
driving circles all through town
You'd have thought we should be sleeping
and I'd want to fool around.
then I'll think-
someday I'll learn to love with caution,
and to keep some for myself.
someday I'll learn to love less often,
and to not need someone else.




Blessing all the birds that died so I could live
be a woman, be a woman


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Old 14-03-2011, 01:40 PM   #2
mikey
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I really like this. The style is simplistic and works well.
I especially like the first three lines and the last four.
Great stuff!



There are, it has been said, two types of people in the world. There are those who, when presented with a glass that is exactly half full, say: 'This glass is half full'. And then there are those who say: 'This glass is half empty'.
The world belongs, however, to those who can look at the glass and say: 'What's up with this glass? Excuse me? Excuse me? This is my glass? I don't think so. My glass was full! And it was a bigger glass!

Terry Pratchett


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Old 14-03-2011, 09:50 PM   #3
Louise
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really like it, thank you for sharing it with us.





“Never lose faith in yourself,
and never lose hope;
remember, even when this world throws its worst and then turns its back,
there is still always hope.”


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