a crack at wack poetry

[stuckin2009]

titled: late at night i play cd's

I'm high again
Marijuana and acetaminophen
Mix in diphenhydramine hydrochloride
Land of the living, get me to the other side

Razors to feel, drugs to be numb
Head hurts like ****, heart bangs like a drum
"I put my money where my mouth is" rings in each ear
For once, I will pray, to be anywhere but here

Tonight I make a promise to me and me only
That I will die alone but never be lonely
The wiring in my mind has shorted, gone bad
This was the day I realized I was sad.

[Pi.R^2]

Wow, that's quite dark. I like the rhymes that you've included.
I hope you're OK and that writing is a good outlet for how you're feeling.

[stuckin2009]

Thank you, I do enjoy writing it’s one of the only healthy outlets I have. Thanks for reading.

[Knee-Socks]

I really like it {I enjoy dark things}. I feel like it is a nice start of a rap. I hope you are doing okay and happy you have an outlet like this that helps.

[stuckin2009]

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Originally Posted by Knee-Socks

I really like it {I enjoy dark things}. I feel like it is a nice start of a rap. I hope you are doing okay and happy you have an outlet like this that helps.

Thank you very much for reading I'm glad you enjoyed it!