Reviews Requested- Contains upsetting material - rest in peace Riley moscatel

[skylerwithsirens]

He was trapped
Hoping that maybe
If he fell asleep he wouldn't wake up

He was trapped
Every morning he looked in the mirror
And saw a girl looking back

He was trapped
Maybe he could peel himself out
Maybe he was under that awful skin

He was trapped

So he flew
And he found himself
But nobody could see him

He was trapped
So he killed the girl
And flew
Like a blue balloon
Into the sky
In a body he loved

[Sooty]

I like that this has taken the man trapped at the beginning to being set free at the end. I can't imagine the pain and anguish of being trapped in the wrong body and how difficult it would be to find yourself but no-one could see.

I also like that you used blue to describe the balloon which I took as blue being seen as masculine and also the colour of the sky so the balloon would blend into the sky like you would blend into normality in your new body.

Sophie.x

[waleed1]

I also like that you used blue to describe the balloon which I took as blue being seen as masculine and also the colour of the sky so the balloon would blend into the sky like you would blend into normality in your new body.