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Old 14-04-2012, 04:12 AM   #1
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Reviews Requested- Contains upsetting material - The Story

Just something I quickly scribbled down a moment ago...let me know what you think.


The Story

The scars tell a story
Of a different time
One of darkness and despair

They play out their tune
Across her skin
As music across a page

As time goes by
She uncovers them
Hesitant but not ashamed

No longer are they
Angry red welts
But faded into fine pink lines

As if to say,
"There I have been,
And there I will never return."



Laura


"I have found the paradox, that if you love until it hurts, there can be no more hurt, only more love." ~Mother Theresa


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Old 17-04-2012, 02:53 PM   #2
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Another really nice poem, Laura!!

If you have a collection of poems maybe you should consider trying to get them published.

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