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Old 04-04-2011, 10:45 PM   #1
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So this will be my last thread in creative corner, because now I show you all basically all I can of my creativity. But I thought I share some of my poems and song-lyrics. So here is one called The loneliest girl.



The loneliest girl in all the world, she doesn't have a heart,
She gave it to a boy one day and he broke it all apart.

He took all the tiny pieces and thou them in the sea,
and she went down there searching so that she can be free.

She walked and walked and walked and walked, for days, a week , a year,
But all she saw was seaweed and bigger fish to fear.

Soon she got so tired she had to stop and build a nest,
in there she sits the loneliest girl to rest and rest and rest.

One day there comes a little boy, nocking on the door,
when no one opens he stumbles in and falls flat on the floor.

He hasten to stand up so he cud not have been seen,
But the lonely girl only sits still just like a figurine.

He brush his legs, his arms, his chest to get rid of all the sand,
than he walks over to her side and gently grab her hand.

To see if it mowed he looked within her chest,
and so he got an idea how to wake her from her painful rest.

He piked the pieces from the ground and pot them all together,
than he bound it with a bow made from finest leather.

and while the heart was lying and waiting in the sand,
he cracked her chest open with a small and gentle hand.

where he paced the heart, with the greatest care,
and watched it slowly start to beat deep within there.

and then he stitched her up, with needle and with thread,
and laid her to rest upon the little bed.

he waited patiently by her side, for manny endless hours,
and every day he filed the nest with freshly picked sea-flowers.

than suddenly one day at half past 3,
she open her sleepy eyes to see.

Now the loneliest little girl in all the world is not so lonely any more,
and all because of one sweet boy who stumbled upon her floor.



Quidquid latine dictum sit, altum videtur - Anything said in Latin sounds profound

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Old 05-04-2011, 08:30 PM   #2
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I am sorry that this will your last thread in creative corner, this is really well done, well written.





“Never lose faith in yourself,
and never lose hope;
remember, even when this world throws its worst and then turns its back,
there is still always hope.”


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Old 05-04-2011, 09:09 PM   #3
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thank you, I think I'll fill this thread up with several poems (and possibly some music lyrics I'we written to) so this is not the last at least. I'm really happy you like my work.



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Old 06-04-2011, 10:02 PM   #4
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I think I'm falling to pieces, shattered on the ground.
I'm braking apart without a sound.

Calling out, without a voice.
Fall to the floor without a choice.


limbs detaching, can't find my mind,
lost with no place to find.

the chest is crying but you cud not see,
what I will not allow myself to be.

a black hole is swallowing me from inside,
And I am so sorry I lied.

I can feel the sharp splinters move inside my veins.



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