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Old 06-08-2013, 03:32 AM   #1
DarkWhispers123
Whats the point in living? We're all going to die
 
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She and I (poem)

she smiles, i cry
she`s brave, i`m shy
she loves, i`m alone
she`s amazing, i`m unknown
she`s beautiful, i`m a mess
she`s happy, i`m depressed
she`s fake, i am real
my mask is perfect, she hides me.

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Old 18-08-2013, 02:25 PM   #2
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I really like that right until the end I thought you were talking about two different people but really talking about you and the mask you wear to hide how you feel inside. One thing though, if your mask is perfect then why is there so much sadness and pain still lying beneath it. Surely a perfect mask would be one that lets you shine from inside out?

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Soon... Now will be then...Today will be yesterday... Present will be past...And thought will be memory... So...Live for the future! Make your future how you want it!

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Old 22-08-2013, 06:57 PM   #3
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Wow, really love it!



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