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Old 23-03-2009, 09:23 PM   #1
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Triggering (Abuse) - Dolly

Hello Dolly,
How are you today?
I'm all alone,
I want to play,

Mummy's not listening,
My friends have gone away,
I'll be big too,
One day,

I don't want to bath,
But Daddy says I must,
I want to keep my clothes on,
Sit in the dust,

Talk to me Dolly,
It's getting dark,
Daddy hit me,
Left a big, red mark,

I'm scared Dolly,
He's at the door,
If I fight back,
He'll only hurt me more,

A door slides open,
A dark figure stands,
Feet apart,
Belt in hands,

She never screamed,
Never uttered a sound,
She trusted her Daddy,
She'll never be found,

Golden curls,
Deep, dark eyes,
A girl and her doll,
Together lie.

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Old 26-03-2009, 11:57 AM   #2
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Wow.
just wow

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Old 26-03-2009, 06:04 PM   #3
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BECKY!
 
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Thats sensational writing. It fitted beautifully and although the topic is a very upsetting one it has real substance! thanks for sharing!






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Old 26-03-2009, 08:00 PM   #4
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I love it..
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As a little kid you believed in fairytales,
that fantasy of what your life would be: white dress; prince charming who would carry you away to a castle on a hill.
You closed your eyes and had complete and utter faith.
Eventually you grow up. One day you open your eyes and the fairy tale disappears.
But the thing is, it's hard to let go of that fairytale entirely because almost everyone has that smallest bit of hope, of faith,
that one day they will open their eyes and it will come true.


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Old 27-03-2009, 01:44 PM   #5
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Make Love, NOT War.
 
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I'm speechless.. utterly awe stuck... It's so amazing.. Just absolutely utterly amazing... You're such an astounding writer.. absolutely wonderful..

.... If you need somebody, I'm here. You can PM me or contact me through any of my other things on my profile.
*****gentle hugs****



Everyday they go to sleep hoping that when they wake up it'll be different... and everyday they wake up to see that hope is not there...
Make Love, NOT War.


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