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30-06-2008, 03:25 AM
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Triggering (Abuse) - Daddy's Little Girl (poem)
She sits alone waiting on her bed
With bruised up arms and legs
She is filled with a feeling of dread
"Don't hurt me dad" she begs
Tears fill her black and blue eyes
"Please stop" she begs and cries
This is a secret not to tell
For daddy's little girl, this is hell
He raises a hand and strikes her face
Her blood blends with tears
To him she is just a disgrace
He plays on all her fears
Tears fill her black and blue eyes
"Please stop" she begs and cries
This is a secret not to tell
For daddy's little girl, this is hell
All she wishes for is some love
From her dear old dad
Everyday she prays to above
To end all that's bad
With each broken bone
And every bad name
This girl is alone
In this awful game
Tears fill her black and blue eyes
"Please stop" she begs and cries
This is a secret not to tell
For daddy's little girl, this is hell
Sometime so hurt
She can't crawl away
Treated like dirt
She will die one day
She left us at the age of seven
She had her future taken away
She is now resting up in heaven
She left us all in the worst way
Tears no longer fill her eyes
She no longer begs and cries
The secret has now been told
The truth will now unfold
Goodbye our angel, we wont forget
Her heart was filled with love
Now she won't ever get hit
Because she is watching from above
Let me know what you guys think
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30-06-2008, 03:34 AM
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Join Date: Feb 2008
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it's really really good
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"When will people understand that words can cut as sharply as any blade, and that those cuts leave scars upon our souls."
-annon
theres r cool
.gif) <--- this one is for mummy tracie
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30-06-2008, 03:38 AM
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Smile, it confuses people.
Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Western England.
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Wow i almost cried (if i could dry that is)
Its really good, you should definately keep writing poems
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Safe room= AWESOMENESS <3
I Get Lei'd In Vets!!
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30-06-2008, 07:16 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: USA
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That's a good poem. :) but I think you should move this and your other one to the creative corner where people go to appreciate poetry and other writings. *hugs*
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30-06-2008, 07:26 PM
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you are loved and beautiful :)
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: hogwarts ^.^
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haha tracie stole my post O_o
but they're really good :)
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“The good things don’t always soften the bad, but vice-versa, the bad things don’t necessarily spoil the good things and make them unimportant.”
“Nobody important? Blimey, that’s amazing. Do you know, in nine hundred years of time and space I’ve never met anyone who wasn’t important before.”
“If it’s time to go, remember what you’re leaving. Remember the best. My friends have always been the best of me.”
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30-06-2008, 08:54 PM
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completely broken and can't find my tape!
Join Date: Jun 2007
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i like it alot, i almost made my cry cause i know some one who died from child abuse!!!!
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(\__/) (O.o )
(> < ) mr.bunny IM SICK OF TRYING, TIRED OF CRYING,YEAH IM SMILING, BUT INSIDE IM DYING!
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