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Old 30-06-2008, 03:25 AM   #1
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Triggering (Abuse) - Daddy's Little Girl (poem)

She sits alone waiting on her bed
With bruised up arms and legs
She is filled with a feeling of dread
"Don't hurt me dad" she begs

Tears fill her black and blue eyes
"Please stop" she begs and cries
This is a secret not to tell
For daddy's little girl, this is hell

He raises a hand and strikes her face
Her blood blends with tears
To him she is just a disgrace
He plays on all her fears

Tears fill her black and blue eyes
"Please stop" she begs and cries
This is a secret not to tell
For daddy's little girl, this is hell

All she wishes for is some love
From her dear old dad
Everyday she prays to above
To end all that's bad

With each broken bone
And every bad name
This girl is alone
In this awful game

Tears fill her black and blue eyes
"Please stop" she begs and cries
This is a secret not to tell
For daddy's little girl, this is hell

Sometime so hurt
She can't crawl away
Treated like dirt
She will die one day

She left us at the age of seven
She had her future taken away
She is now resting up in heaven
She left us all in the worst way

Tears no longer fill her eyes
She no longer begs and cries
The secret has now been told
The truth will now unfold

Goodbye our angel, we wont forget
Her heart was filled with love
Now she won't ever get hit
Because she is watching from above





Let me know what you guys think

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Old 30-06-2008, 03:34 AM   #2
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it's really really good



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<--- this one is for mummy tracie

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Old 30-06-2008, 03:38 AM   #3
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Wow i almost cried (if i could dry that is)
Its really good, you should definately keep writing poems



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Old 30-06-2008, 07:16 PM   #4
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That's a good poem. :) but I think you should move this and your other one to the creative corner where people go to appreciate poetry and other writings. *hugs*

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Old 30-06-2008, 07:26 PM   #5
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haha tracie stole my post O_o
but they're really good :)



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“Nobody important? Blimey, that’s amazing. Do you know, in nine hundred years of time and space I’ve never met anyone who wasn’t important before.”
“If it’s time to go, remember what you’re leaving. Remember the best. My friends have always been the best of me.”

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Old 30-06-2008, 08:54 PM   #6
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i like it alot, i almost made my cry cause i know some one who died from child abuse!!!!



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