RYL Forums


Forum Jump
Post New Thread  Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread
Old 08-06-2008, 07:41 PM   #1
CoffeeawakestheArtist
 
CoffeeawakestheArtist's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2008
Location: Wales
I am currently:
Triggering (SI) - *comments please*A poem & a started story * triggers suicide*

Each day is a struggle,
as she hides away her tears,
she hurts herself repeatdly to get through all her fears,
ahd she'll hide with that smile,
to disguise all the pain,
deep inside she knows she's dying,
and she'll hurt herself again && again.
They watch and stare as she rolls up her sleeves,
she finds herself hidden in that same private cubicle,
and bleeding, this is how she only knows to grieve,
Yet Her secrets are well hidden,
until that fateful long day,
when her body is hanging,
the guilt is given to the starers: this is their price to pay.


Last edited by CoffeeawakestheArtist : 08-06-2008 at 07:52 PM. Reason: my story's probably too triggering.



Mondrian ^^

Hope is faith holding its hand in the dark.


CoffeeawakestheArtist is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-06-2008, 08:02 PM   #2
Kasai
Tempermental artist
 
Kasai's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2007
I am currently:

This sounds like you put a lot of emotion into it. It's really very good. I like it. <3



Beauty is not caused. It is.


"Without you, everywhere is nowhere."
<3


Kasai is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-06-2008, 10:43 PM   #3
EyelinerAndCigarettes
 
EyelinerAndCigarettes's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2007
I am currently:

Love this han,
V good work!
Keep writing
:heart:







EyelinerAndCigarettes is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-06-2008, 09:50 AM   #4
Snuffles
 

Hey this is really good, sad too, but it is really good, great wordage ;) *squishes*

  Reply With Quote
Reply


Currently Active Members Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Censor is ON
Forum Jump


Sea Pink Aroma
All times are GMT +1. The time now is 11:21 AM.