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Old 26-04-2008, 02:42 PM   #1
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Triggering (SI) - the razor (poem)

i look at the razor
and look at my wrist
just do it you wuss, the voices hiss

i touch the razor
and touch a vain
i long to see the crimson rain

i pick up the razor
and pick a spot
should i do it? or should i not?

i move the razor
and move my wrist
all this pain for a moment of bliss

i put away the razor
and put away my wrist
and cry about the skin the razor kissed



'the pain you feel is real,
you're not asleep,
but its a nightmare,
but you cant wake up anytime.'


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Old 26-04-2008, 04:52 PM   #2
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i really like this (y)
awesome! :O)

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Old 26-04-2008, 06:18 PM   #3
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thanks =]



'the pain you feel is real,
you're not asleep,
but its a nightmare,
but you cant wake up anytime.'


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Old 27-04-2008, 04:07 AM   #4
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I like it. its short and emotional. :)



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all-hope.lost-forever is my tasty jelly bean!
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Old 27-04-2008, 04:48 AM   #5
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I think it's incredibly good!



why would you help clean me up if i'm the mess you never made?

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