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Old 14-06-2007, 06:57 PM   #1
Crucifixes_for_ladies
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Triggering (Suicide) - If I had the guts

I closed my door

locked it tight

took a breath

and got the knife

do I have the guts

to put this on my skin

pull it across

and dig it in

and if I had the guts

to put a gun to my head

and if I pulled the trigger

you would find me dead

Would you really care?

would you notice

that I'm not there

all the scars you see

do you know

they where made by me?

Tell me this is the end

Take this heart

that I could never mend

I stand at the edge

If I had the guts

I'd jump from the ledge

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Old 14-06-2007, 06:58 PM   #2
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Aww :( Great rhyming..

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Old 14-06-2007, 07:16 PM   #3
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This is excellent, I love the ryhming scheme as well.

I hope all is well. *hugs*



Whats with devastation disappearing like deforestation?
I can't believe I've been deceived by own worst enemy;
Myself cauterized my heart, denying the spark and nearly tearing worlds apart.


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Old 16-06-2007, 12:35 AM   #4
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thats very moving really... and its well written. I think its meant to be were, not where, on the "they where made by me" bit! Well done though... Very good!



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Old 16-06-2007, 01:02 AM   #5
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It's very moving.
I love the ryhme scheme.
<3
Take care.






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