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Old 22-04-2008, 05:46 AM   #1
Atonement
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Triggering - Notice Me?

This is written about how I will sit up everynight, just like I am when I am posting this and just like I did when I wrote it, and wait for my mom to come home from the bar all drunk. Yet I worry sick and wait for her to call from the... well, just read it already.

If Only I Could Say/Notice

All the children tease me,
I was sick the other day.
They all think I fake it,
If only I could say.

I was up all last night,
waiting for you to come home.
I wanted to know you are alive,
As you drove home alone.

Did you drink too much?
Will you ramble at me tonight?
I worry about this,
I think that you just might.

I am sick so often,
because I cannot sleep.
I worry about you,
I stay up and weep.

Your entrance never fails,
I hear you come home once more.
I hear your drunken brawls,
It hurts me to the core.

I worry myself sick,
that you are okay.
I wait for you to notice,
I wonder what you'd say.


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Old 22-04-2008, 05:56 AM   #2
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man that was good but sad *hugs*

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Old 22-04-2008, 06:24 AM   #3
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You are really good at writing Tucker! so many talents..
It's sweet of you to worry, I pray that both of you are fine. Does she know how you feel?



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Old 22-04-2008, 08:45 AM   #4
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hey hun
great poems there really good
keep writing i want to read more
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Old 22-04-2008, 08:52 PM   #5
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Wow thts really sad
really good =]
hope your okay x



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