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Old 14-03-2008, 07:29 PM   #1
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Simple - a poem i have written




I’m just a simple girl
A girl that is fed up of all the lies
A girl that has had enough of the rumors
A girl that has given up on fighting her battles
A girl that can’t wait to leave and start a new
I’m just a simple girl
A girl who has learnt from her mistakes
A girl who is ready to move on
A girl who tries not to get complicated
A girl that has secretly failed
I’m just a simple girl
A girl that has suffered enough
A girl that can’t stop thinking about what went wrong
A girl that wants to leave them all behind
A girl that can no longer trust a sole
I’m just a simple girl
A girl that refuses to give up
A girl that won’t let others get in the way
A girl that has had enough of things going wrong
I’m just a simple girl
Or at least that what I want them to believe.


just a little poem i wrote, i hope you liked it and please feel free to comment.
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Old 14-03-2008, 08:08 PM   #2
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To be honest the repetitive use of the word girl kind of put me off hun, but otherwise it is good



'Never forget what you are. The rest of the world will not. Wear it like armor, and it can never be used to hurt you.'

['There is only one thing we say to death. Not today'.']

'We are each our own devil, and we make this world our hell.’ – Oscar Wilde
‘It’s hard to dance with the devil on your back.’ Sydney Carter


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Old 14-03-2008, 11:37 PM   #3
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Buttons (: You're one of the few people I've met that's seen Rent. x

And Sophie - I like the poem. It's good. I'm not a fan of poems that don't rhyme, but this one, idk. I like it (:

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