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Old 12-03-2008, 08:47 PM   #1
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Just a little poem (be nice this is my first thread!) *Triggering (SI)*

I draw a line,
At first not visible
It soon seeps into view

Its gentle arrival
Followed
By a hastier flow

Cupped hands catch courage
This line will heal

And again
I will carve
The heart onto my sleeve


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Old 12-03-2008, 08:49 PM   #2
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Cupped hands catch courage
This line will heal

this line is especially beautiful.
the entire poem is beautiful.
stick a trigger warning on it before someone complains though.




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Old 12-03-2008, 08:54 PM   #3
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i dont know how to :S

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Old 12-03-2008, 08:55 PM   #4
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thank you for your nice comment by the way :)

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Old 12-03-2008, 08:57 PM   #5
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go to edit, you can just stick trigger in the title.
and you are welcome




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Old 12-03-2008, 09:13 PM   #6
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this line will heal...

omg this is amazing, so simple and yet so eloquent, really captures the feeling

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Change has a considerable psychological impact on the human mind.
To the fearful it is threatening because it means that things may get worse.
To the confident it is inspiring because the challenge exists to make things better.
To the hopeful it is encouraging because things may get better.


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Old 12-03-2008, 09:22 PM   #7
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oh wow this is really amazing >.<
take care hun

much love
katy
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Old 13-03-2008, 01:19 AM   #8
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This beautiful, such simple words to explain such a complex thing so well. It's very effective and affecting. Powerful stuff.

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'I can always kill myself tomorrow, today I shall look for reason to live. Of course, tomorrow never comes ... '

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