another poem. thanks

emily.ily9 · 08-03-2008, 03:27 AM

so, bored in math, i tried a sonnet of sorts today.

i once was stumbling blindly through my days,
i did not know where life was taking me.
i held a hand up, blocking off my gaze,
for fear and pain of past is all i'd see.

then you came, bringing light, and changed my view,
gently, you reached up and took my hand.
you held it within yours, i learned anew
to live with trust, to love a life unplanned.

now days take flight with beauty, as a dove
for all i know to come is you, my love.

Dreamer And Believer · 08-03-2008, 04:33 AM

nice word choice...I especially like "you held it within yours, I learned anew to live with trust, to love a life unplanned"
great job.

emily.ily9 · 08-03-2008, 04:12 PM

thank you, glad you liked

little mermaid · 12-03-2008, 07:59 PM

i think your brain is a place i would like to go - i think it would be somewhere i could pick daffodils and lay in the sunshine and the water in the rivers would be clean enough to drink.

linder surprise · 12-03-2008, 08:05 PM

i think lia gives the best compliments ever. haha.
but i completley agree.

emily.ily9 · 13-03-2008, 02:28 AM

aw guys.
i'm NOT tearing, honestly.
it's been a good day, and this topped it off :]