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Old 12-06-2007, 03:31 AM   #1
jlc2010
Quiet Storm
 
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Pine Bluff, Arkansas
I am currently:
Possibly Triggering - heartbroken

Heartbroken,
Torn from its secure shell,
Crushed beneath a
Boot of pain
Crying its own crimson
Spreading from my
Damaged organ of life

Dead inside,
Down for repairs
In need of repairs
The repairs which will
Never come to its rescue,
Only to heal
In shattered pieces of misery

Beatened and battered
My heart begs for mercy
Crying
Screaming
Pleading for someone to
Care, to understand
Tend to its emotional wounds

Murdered of happiness,
A brokened soul
Never whole again
Defeated, unworthy of concern
From others
Forever surrounded by blood of darkness
And pain...so much pain

To lay alone
On the cold, hard ground
Blood pouring from the
Wounds never to completely
Heal, permanent injuries
Which i cannot bear
Without the desire of death
To finally allow me life...


.....yeah, suckish poem...i dont care. its how i think almost all the time....

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Old 12-06-2007, 08:27 AM   #2
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Somewhere over the rainbow...
I am currently:

It's not a suckish poem; don't put your work down.
It's a good poem.
Kinda sad. "Kinda"?!?!
I mean very sad. It's good though.
Are you alright?
Do you need someone to talk to?
PM me if you do.
xx



For what it's worth it was worth all the while. I hope you had the time of your life...

I can see you're sad, even when you smile, even when you laugh; I can see it in your eyes, deep inside you want to cry

~ ddoouubbllee lleetttteerr tthhrreeaaddeerr
~ honourary emma
~ honourary katY [Kat*Y* with a *Y* Club]

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