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Old 01-03-2008, 12:43 PM   #1
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Triggering - Beautiful Knife *SI/SUICIDE/TOOLS*

Beautiful Knife.
Glorious Knife.
The red glistening in the light,
Of the blue moon that night.

The boy he cut,
He slit,
He stabbed.
Red Rivers flowing.

Hate.
Dark.
Death.

His body slumped,
Against an old brick wall,
It grew colder,
Colder by the second.

The boy stiffened,
His short life at an end,
His great suffering,
All at an end.

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Old 01-03-2008, 02:57 PM   #2
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i like this and it's well written it has a lot of emotion in it. xx






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Old 01-03-2008, 07:56 PM   #3
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i like it.. a lot.
its written with details which create a picture in your mind.. i like it.



Everyday they go to sleep hoping that when they wake up it'll be different... and everyday they wake up to see that hope is not there...
Make Love, NOT War.


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Old 01-03-2008, 10:12 PM   #4
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That's amazing...I have to say, its kinda similar to one i wrote a while ago...




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