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Old 26-02-2008, 11:50 PM   #1
Jelly Fairy
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Possibly Triggering - Lyrics for A2 Coursework. Comments Please.

These are the lyrics for my A2 Music Composition. I'll hopefully post a link so you can hear the actual song when it's done :)

And comments greatly appriciated

(Spoken Dialogue)
I think my life’s improving
It’s actually quite exciting
I feel like a butterfly taking off for the first time
But I couldn’t have done it alone…

(Sing) Verse 1:
I’d sit here on my own every night
Wishing for someone to hold me tight
Trying to hide the tears in my eyes
Hoping that no-one hears my cries
My life has always been tough
But just when I thought I’d had enough
You came along and made me smile
And I felt safe for a while.

Chorus:
Every now and then we find an angel
Someone to take special care of us
To turn to when we need guidance
Or when we need someone to trust
You’ve always been there for me
And I really wish you could see
Just how truly fantastic you are
You’ve been my star.

Verse 2:
Things are starting to look up for me
One day I might finally be free
Free from the bleeding and abuse
To finally put my life to better use
Never forget the times we’ve shared
No other friends would have compared
To the amazing people you are
Always remember that you’re my stars

Chorus:
Every now and then we find an angel
Someone to take special care of us
To turn to when we need guidance
Or when we need someone to trust
You’ve always been there for me
And I really wish you could see
Just how truly fantastic you are
You’ve been my star.


(Instrumental)


(Spoken section) Bridge:
You’ve helped me realise my dreams
You taught me never to give up
And for that I want to give my thanks
I wouldn’t have made it this far without you

(Sing) Chorus:
Every now and then we find an angel
Someone to take special care of us
To turn to when we need guidance
Or when we need someone to trust
You’ve always been there for me
And I really wish you could see
Just how truly fantastic you are
You’ve been my star.

(Spoken ending) Coda:
I know I can survive
You’ve shown me that
And I promise to you
I’ll never give up






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Old 26-02-2008, 11:58 PM   #2
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i really like those lyrics, i'd love to hear the song when it's done. good luck :)



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Old 27-02-2008, 06:41 PM   #3
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*wishes i could write that well*
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“The good things don’t always soften the bad, but vice-versa, the bad things don’t necessarily spoil the good things and make them unimportant.”
“Nobody important? Blimey, that’s amazing. Do you know, in nine hundred years of time and space I’ve never met anyone who wasn’t important before.”
“If it’s time to go, remember what you’re leaving. Remember the best. My friends have always been the best of me.”

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Old 27-02-2008, 08:16 PM   #4
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That's fantastic!! it should get you a really good mark... good luck...and I'd like to hear the song when it's recorded




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Old 27-02-2008, 08:21 PM   #5
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Oh Jen...Jelly...lady...I love it. I'm actually itching to hear it 'cause I'm sure you have a lovely voice =)




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Old 27-02-2008, 08:53 PM   #6
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Pfft - I won't be singing it...I can't sing to save my life. I'll either be playing flute, piccolo, clarinet, bass clarinet, violin, or piano in it :P






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Old 27-02-2008, 08:54 PM   #7
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They're lovely dearest :]
I can't wait to hear it put to music.



"Be nice. Think happy thoughts. Champion silver linings. Love all things (not just cute things like babies and kittens) & when you do love - love like they do in power ballads (you know like on a cliff with the wind in your hair and your eyes shut, knowing you'll never know love like this). Watch out for dog poo. Smile at people - even grumpy ones. Remember anything is possible & whatever you do always try to look on the bright side."

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