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Old 11-02-2008, 01:21 AM   #1
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Triggering (SI) - The Girl Behind Her Window Pane

She sits and stares behind her window pane
The tears building in her eyes
Needing a truth or something real
But all she holds is lies

She watches from her prison
Begging for real affection
The only other soul she sees is hers
Her friend is her reflection

The only words she hears are hers
Whispering words unknown
Calling for her Saviour
But she knows there's no-one home

Pain is all she's learnt to know
The only thing she needs to feel
To remind her not just torment runs through her veins
To remind her she's still real

Deeper and deeper she will go
Red runs fast as she starts to weep
The pain will only end for her
Once she falls asleep

She sits alone throughout the night
And watches day start to break
Another day to try and survive
How she wishes she wasn't awake

The morning sun shines through the window
Bathing her in light
She knows that she is still alone
But has to keep up the fight

Her visible scar will heal
But the mental one still shows
And from behind her little window pane
About her daily life she goes

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Old 11-02-2008, 01:25 AM   #2
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im crying
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Old 25-02-2008, 08:26 PM   #3
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I love it

Maybe you could show me some more of your stuff sometime

Paul x

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Old 25-02-2008, 08:52 PM   #4
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its beautiful ♥



And sail away these faces we hide behind
Cutting through the airwaves
Open up our minds
Show ourselves to the world tonight
Cause we are.. No longer in disguise ♫

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Old 25-02-2008, 09:01 PM   #5
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Wow...This is incredible. There's so much emotion inside of this.

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Old 25-02-2008, 09:05 PM   #6
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LOVE it. totally reminds me of a piece i did

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Old 26-02-2008, 07:12 PM   #7
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that impressive it has to be said,
though i did think where u put she wishes she wasnt awake, i thought alive would have fitted better but thats me being picky.

the poem is fabulous babe =D



<3 He took the blade from her hand and whispered gently in her ear " hold on and everything will be alright" <3


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Old 27-02-2008, 12:35 AM   #8
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That was amazing.



2 o'clock in the morning, something's on my mind
Can't get no
rest; keep walkin' around
If I
pretend that nothin' ever went wrong, I can get to my sleep
I can think that we just carried on

This is the
hardest story that I've ever told
No
hope, or love, or glory
Happy endings gone forever more
I feel as if I'm
wasted
And I'm
wastin' every day

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Old 27-02-2008, 02:58 AM   #9
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Brought me to tears its really good
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Old 18-03-2008, 04:29 AM   #10
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It reminds me of myself...Very interesting. I like how you speak in third person. It is a unique perspective. Well done. I cna feel the emotion in this.



Why can't you just
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all-hope.lost-forever is my tasty jelly bean!
oderint_dum_metuant is my BEAUTIFULANGEL. NoSanity is my FlOaTiNg BuBble.
d.rocky is my Mr.Bor :p

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Old 19-03-2008, 04:58 PM   #11
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oh chels i love it :) xx





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