whisper

[xbreakmyheart_murderx]

I whisper a few words to you
and pray that you will hear them
I want you to know
that i'm trying so much to keep on going
but with everthing happening
I feel like im just falling
and cannot grip onto something solid
I know that your trying to understand me
but it's hard to see inside my head
because i try to hide myself from you so much
when i know i shouldn't
as it's not helping me at all

[typsee]

Sounds like you've got a good friend there ..... I hope one day you could feel comfortable enough to show them this piece of writing.

I know quite a few people who are really good at hiding what they are really feeling and who have difficulties in telling people that they are struggling ..... but then when you take the time to look at their artwork, or read their poems or creative writing, then their true emotions are as plain as day!

This is why I love the Creative Corner of RYL!

Not only do creative activities such as painting, drawing, poems, stories, creative writing, photography etc, give people the opportunity to express what they are really feeling inside, but it also gives other people the chance to get a glimpse of those inner thoughts and feelings that are going on inside another person, which I believe is a true privelledge to share.

Well done on your poem breakmyheart.