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Old 21-11-2013, 03:02 AM   #1
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- synaesthesia + life = hope kinda important



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I shot a soul last night

Behind chameleon tuned eyes

It tore a hole through the universe

And then trimmed it down to size

A choir of ether crickets

Slapped cadenzas off a star

So I put on both my glasses

And I walked along that bar



The bar man sows new silver

From a fading rag of gold

I wore a smile against my spine

And drunk a garnished cold

My bottle cracked a fever

And we spat a plasma sky

Then the asphalt burnt with dreams

And in the dark a thick reed sighed...



Turn me in the static

Tear a lip edge down each cry

Tracking from the infinite

As galaxies collide

There above one beam I saw

A moon that trickles flies

Their eclipses fill forever

And they spiral out in minds



My hands held on like ashes

Kicked me back through years of stone

It's too late to charm the East

With all the games we play alone

When a spine splits into seashells

And a smile splits tattered knees

Obsidian is flowering

And molluscs scream bone trees



But the night of night is noiseless

Though its tongue could split all dawn

Corrode clay walls with citric

Thrusting skin from budding thorns

Children fish by silent rivers

Carvings crows to candycanes

But by now some ears can't feel these words

So I will play new ones with rain



Below the hold of colour

Past splintered waves of rhyme

Waits a worm that pins a finger

To each note that licks in time

There's a light hung off horizons

You can taste it when you bleed

Two people plug one current

But only one shock seeds



Plucking on an eyelash

Strumming stretched steps into feet

With a pot of blazing birdsong

And a face ripped out of meat

The only dreams were circles

Stamping nails by spiral hands

And I looked back with those lashes

Over everything I am



And we will weave another colour

Spinning footsteps with sweet sand

For anyone else to read this

You must also read each hand

And if this seems like nonsense

You have played your keys apart

Since the souls that can still swim this stream

Sprout feathers in the dark



That slip from lizard skins

To breathe their beat with better hearts

















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Old 21-11-2013, 09:47 AM   #2
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That flowed really well when i read it and I love that you have some really strong images in there :) Hope you keep writing x



I feel insane every single time
I'm asked to compromise
Cause I'm afraid and stuck in my ways
And that's the way it stays
So how long did I expect love to outweigh ignorance?
By that look on your face I may have forced the scale to tip

I'm not insane, I'm not insane.

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Old 21-11-2013, 08:19 PM   #3
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very well written. you did well on it





♪"'Cause I'm about to break down,
I'm searchin' for a way out,
I'm a liar, I'm a cheater, I'm a non-believer
I'm a popular, popular monster"♪



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Old 22-11-2013, 11:18 AM   #4
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I really found this very moving x

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Old 28-11-2013, 12:29 AM   #5
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It's great.

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