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Old 11-09-2013, 08:34 PM   #1
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Reviews Requested- Safe - An Ode to Joy Division

I set myself a little challenge to write a poem based on the titles of songs by Joy Division, and this is what I came up with.

An Ode to Joy Division

I stood there in Warsaw
Watching the Leaders of Men
As they stand on platforms of Glass.
They revel in the Atmosphere
of Failures that have become somewhat of a Novelty These Days.

They begin the Digital Transmission of the fact that She's Lost Control.
There's No Love Lost in this fact. They knew that Komakino
Would never reveal where the Dead Souls were.
I knew that she would escape and go to safety. But From Safety to Where?
I worried that Love would tear us apart again...

I was right.



‎"Damaged people are dangerous because we know we can survive"



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Old 11-09-2013, 08:53 PM   #2
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I was hoping this would be good because I'm performing on Saturday night in Coven Garden at the Poetry Cafe and this is what I'm kicking off with!

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Old 12-09-2013, 08:03 AM   #3
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I'm a big fan of Joy Division and I really enjoyed this.

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