Reviews Requested- Contains upsetting material - Rappers In Space, Taboo and You :)

[The Stranger Stranger]

I killed my brother's imaginary friend
I think he was a rapper from space
I thank god his happiness did not end
Stuff like that happens when people are in a dark place
Like when I cut
I'd write about anorexia too but
I eat well so I can't tell
But if you cut or you burn
And your heart is broken
You feel like you can't return
From the person in the mirror
Who believes in long sleeves and bracelets
I'm not going to say drop the blade and face it
Only because you've heard it before
From a hundred people
I'm just one more
And you already know the score
No
If you want to quit
I need nothing more
That's it
You seem nice
A person I'd like to know
And I understand taboo ain't a place you want to go
I've **** so many bricks writing this that there's a door
On a house between my legs
Shelter for a family of four
I'm just going ask sonething
Not why
Just as much as anyone can
And no girl or guy
Cañ force you to do anymore than that
I'm just asking you to try
That'll give me a smile for a long while
And if the message in this piece didn't send
If you want to throw in the towel and give up.
Just remember you can't kill an imaginary friendr

[TheLoneWolf]

i really like this poem :) it's strangely comforting x

[The Stranger Stranger]

Ţhanks a million. Not my best work but I'm glad you liked it. I like your duality Sig btw

[Fiddlesticks]

Ahaha, all the slipknot fans appear. It's a very sweet piece of work. There's affection there and a lot of writing here can seem very cold and flat but this has genuine warmth. Well come