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Old 08-08-2013, 10:26 PM   #1
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Set Free
By Alyssa Blackburn©


She sits feeling the wind blow through her hair
Thinking of her goals
To recover from self harm
To be set free
The goal seems so far away
For she has slipped up again
Yet she is not giving up
For one day she will be set free
Today her world crashed around her
Yet no thoughts of self harm
For once she was free of them
Instead tears burst from her eyes
As much as she hates to cry
She let the tears slide down her cheek
She felt her chest releasing all the pain
She thought to herself
She thought of how proud of herself she was
No thoughts of self harm
And crying all in one day
One day she will be set free
Dear Knife one day you will have no control over me
You will leave no more scars
No more emotional pain
No more she shouts
She feels a little stronger today
As she lifts her face to the sky
She feels like recovery is possible
Like her dream of being set free will come true
Then she can chase rainbows
Then she can freely let God catch her every tear
Then she can overcome
To be set free
A dream she has with all her heart
One day the knife will die
And she will survive
She will conquer
She will smile
She will rejoice
She will be set free
She sits in the wind feeling it blow on her face
Knowing that one day she will be set free

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Old 18-08-2013, 02:02 PM   #2
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This is really inspiring and full of hope. I love how you described tears 'bursting' from her eyes.

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Soon... Now will be then...Today will be yesterday... Present will be past...And thought will be memory... So...Live for the future! Make your future how you want it!

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Old 20-08-2013, 12:10 AM   #3
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I completely love this! It has given me hope! Amazing!!

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Old 21-08-2013, 03:27 PM   #4
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Wow!!!! I'm blown away- an amazing poem with so much hope!! I love the line "Dear knife, one day you will have no control over me"- your words have so much conviction I've no doubt you'll make them come true one day. Would love to read more, when you have more to write



So she lights up a candle for hope to be found
Captive and blind by the darkness around
Each wave a promise, a new hope reborn
Sunrise consoles at the break of dawn

Kamelot - A Sailorman's Hymn Lyrics



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