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Old 06-08-2013, 03:28 AM   #1
DarkWhispers123
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The Darkness (poem) (reviews please)

As the night fell,
her ghost rose up,
As if to slip into the grave,
she was trapped in utter darkness.

No one had come for her,
as far as she had known.
The night falling like autumn leaves,
suddenly seemed so far.

For in this darkness,
there was nothing to see.
No rain, sleet, or snow,
no wind about to blow,
no leaves about to fall,
no lightening about to crash.

Inside this dark was nothing,
but yet everything unknown.

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Old 18-08-2013, 02:30 PM   #2
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I like how you describe dark as having nothing but everything. I guess this true in reality. Darkness is an absence of light but everything is at sometime in darkness on this planet. If you cannot see what is in the darkness, it doesn't mean it is not there. You just need to wait for the sun to rise to realise that not all is lost into the dark.

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