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Old 25-07-2013, 01:26 AM   #1
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Personal Piece- Contains upsetting material - my latest poem :)

You fall against the wall and onto the floor
In your head you’re screaming I can’t take it no more
In the day you smile but you break down at night
you want to give in, give up the fight
you roll up your sleeve, take hold of the blade
look on your arm for where more scars can be made
you drag the blade across your skin again, and again
the crimson blood lets go of the anger the pain
you press down without any fears
each drop of blood replacing your silent tears
the beautiful mess you’ve now created on your arm
why on earth do you cause yourself this harm?
Please darling why can’t you look in the mirror and see
The amazing person that you can be?





i dont know if its very good :/



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Old 25-07-2013, 06:44 AM   #2
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this is really good hun :)x





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Old 25-07-2013, 10:41 PM   #3
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thankk youu :)



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Old 26-07-2013, 01:26 AM   #4
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i can definitely relate to this, as i'm not creative i'd say you've put some of my thoughts into words :) x

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Old 27-07-2013, 08:24 AM   #5
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Im not too creative but sometimes the words for poems just come into my head so I write them into a poem.



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Old 27-07-2013, 06:45 PM   #6
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It's beautiful! :)



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Old 29-07-2013, 01:23 PM   #7
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Old 30-07-2013, 05:12 PM   #8
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this is amazing.. i love it.

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Old 05-08-2013, 06:28 AM   #9
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So beautifully written

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Old 08-08-2013, 09:31 PM   #10
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