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Reviews Requested- Contains upsetting material - My blond hero
This is a piece I wrote personally two or three years ago now. It's a real life based piece as is most of my work. I have alot more if people are interested not that I'm expecting it of course. Well I hope you enjoy it
A shadow on the wall,
A door creeking.
Things I remember from my childhood.
A sign of weakness shows on my arm. Your mark.
The blond was kind, he made love; from hatred. He cared to my wounds the others made. He wept when the others laughed.
Alone, bedbound, afraid.
You came to talk to me. You were kind. You loved nice.
A hurt I can't remove binds me, they're not yet found. I didn't tell about my blond savour, the one who kept me sane from my days of darkness.
The things I'll never tell, never forget; never forgive.
My chest ripped open. My pain for the whole world to see.
A face of discust you made as I made one of pain. You were gentle. Soft but hard. I began to feel for you; I don't know if you felt the same.
I miss you, months after the end. I'm still afraid, cold, cut; dead.
I'm a house lived in and left, never to be whole again.
Good bye blond hero.
Last edited by Wolfir : 14-07-2013 at 09:48 AM.
Reason: Wanted to change/get rid of last line
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