Reviews Requested- Contains upsetting material - stumble

[Myimmortalgirl]

It will work I said
I can do this
Meet me tonight I said
We can make this work

Stumble
as I approach you
Words fall in my head
Like broken bits of glass

It's too late now
You've found another
Left me in the gutter
Watching the raindrops fall
like tear drops from my eyes

Stumble
Fall over at your feet
Wishing the ground would swallow me up
Take me away from this evil dark world

[PassedExpectations]

is this about something that just happened? it sounds like a very painful experience...

and i'm proud of you for making a thread btw :)

[Myimmortalgirl]

Basically loosing the girl who I thought would be the one. And **** that is going on, struggling big time at the moment

[nowhereman]

You know I'm here for you hunni. I like your poem though obviously I'm sorry about the reason you wrote it and I can feel your pain through it. Xx