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Old 05-06-2013, 11:03 PM   #1
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Reviews Requested- Contains upsetting material - My first poem

No one sees the pain she's trying to hide, All they see is her painted on smile, Lost in a world where no one seems to care
Reaching out to people who aren't even there
Her demons she keeps locked away in a box
There all breaking free and she knows she's lost
Her children in bed now are fast asleep
So up the stairs she gently creeps
In her room the door tightly locked
Is where she harms not wanting to stop.

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Old 06-06-2013, 06:00 AM   #2
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This is great especially for it to be your first poem!! :)



"I Desire The Things Which Will Destroy Me In The End"
-Sylvia Plath


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Old 07-06-2013, 06:07 PM   #3
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Thank you. I just wrote what I was feeling at the time x

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