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Old 28-10-2012, 05:54 PM   #1
DesolateNight
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Reviews Requested- Contains upsetting material - Vent Music Video/ PV *Warning: May Be Triggering*


Link to image: http://followmyredshadow.deviantart.com/#/d5j8t9e

Hi guys <3 I just finished this one animation/ music video thingy! I was feeling upset more so than usual so I went and made a vent video. The song is Shattered by Trading Yesterday. *on Youtube* I poured my heart into it so please enjot it! ^^ And don't be afraid to tell me what you think of it, so that I can improve! I don't bite!

My Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LhtEUfvsNso


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Old 04-11-2012, 09:33 PM   #2
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I like the simplicity and the ambiguity of your animations. It makes us as outsiders fill in your animation in a way that we can relate to even if it's not directly how you saw its representation.

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Soon... Now will be then...Today will be yesterday... Present will be past...And thought will be memory... So...Live for the future! Make your future how you want it!

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Old 08-11-2012, 08:33 PM   #3
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I really like this - the plain black lines with only red here and there is really rather striking. :)

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As you said crits are ok, one thing I noticed is your rear leg anatomy.

Redline: https://www.dropbox.com/s/9glkxckpmu...anatomyryl.png (My drawing isn't very good, refer to the generic dog photo :P)

The bones A and B are pretty similar in length, and C is shorter. Oh, and there's no dew/thumb on the rear legs, only the forelegs.

Sorry to be nit-picking! It's a very small error.


But the art fits really well with the song, especially with how it's timed to fade in and out like you've done.

I hope you feel better soon. :)

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'Cause I've heard it said that every mushroom cloud has a silver lining.


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