Triggering (SI) - What I gave you

Crucifixes_for_ladies · 30-10-2009, 07:41 AM

I gave you my skin
I gave my pain
My pleasure
My grief
My memory
Everything that meant anything
Anything that meant nothing
You have my life
You have my friends
Have my body
Have my mind
Control my feelings
My entire world
Centered around you
You gave me back a moment
A moment of peace
A moment of quiet
All the noise in my head
all the pain in my chest
You take it all away
if only for a moment

siffa · 31-10-2009, 12:51 AM

very nice, i really appreciate this poem. its sweet and thoughtful and honest. its a refreshing poem to read, thanks for sharing. you have some clever ideas in there.

Crucifixes_for_ladies · 31-10-2009, 07:16 AM

thank you very much=)

xMandarrx · 31-10-2009, 08:04 AM

I really love the honesty of this poem. : )

Crucifixes_for_ladies · 01-11-2009, 04:14 PM

Thanks!