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Old 06-07-2009, 01:48 AM   #1
charlieglasgow
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accountability, what's that? (poem)

rapists abusers murderers
prepare to be let off the hook
courtesy of
Jesus and America, inc.
it's not okay (for victims) to be angry anymore
so hit stab
tell her what a slut she is.
The system's with you!!!
(unless you're a black man, latino man)
even still
you are a man
therefore
anything you do
wrong
should
be
forgiven
instantly.
they shouldn't harm their pretty little minds after
all you have to
climb to the top
we wouldn't want a mistake to mess with that.
why should she speak out?
she should be too busy worshiping



you.



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Old 06-07-2009, 02:00 AM   #2
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The first 4 lines were awesome (Y) And a good poem overall as usual :)

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Old 06-07-2009, 07:54 AM   #3
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I like your style :)

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Old 06-07-2009, 09:26 AM   #4
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It's a good poem. Expressive. Well done




Das Leben ich(The life of me)


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Old 07-07-2009, 06:09 PM   #5
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Wow, this is a really powerful poem. You write really well.



Ask me mistakes I have made
Ask me whether what I have done is my life

Others have come, in their slow way -
And some have come to help, or to hurt -

Ask me what difference
Their strongest love or hate has made.

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