It was 11:45 when we started to load up the van. Dan and Sara were busy making snacks and other foodie items for us to enjoy on the beach. Ahren and Mer were out getting beverages to allow us to quench our thirst. Seb was busy gathering towels and an umbrella to mark our turf. As for me, I was filling up the gas tank so we’d be set for the trip. Mer and Ahren were pulling into the driveway as I was screwing the cap back on.
“So, whaddya get?” I asked.
“Let’s see…”Ahren said, pulling the bags out of the trunk. He began naming off names of beverages as Mer placed them inside a big, red cooler. “We have Heineken and Bailey’s for the alcohol.” Mer pulled out a six-pack of beer and a bottle of the Irish cream.” For the non-alcoholic, we have Mountain Dew, Coke, and water.” Mer topped all the beverages with a five pound bag of ice.
“That should keep ‘em cool enough.” Mer shrugged, tossing all the bags into the recycle bin.
Dan and Sara joined us moments later, each toting a small, blue cooler.
“Just some snacks for us to enjoy.” Sara smiled, handing her cooler off to Ahren.
“Sandwiches and desserts should be great for our trip.” Dan said, putting his cooler in the back of the van. Sara was wearing a blue one-piece with the sides cut out of it. It did a great job of showing off her curves. I have some curves…but not like Sara…hers could kill!
Seb came out bopping behind them, his inky arms full of towels and an umbrella sticking out of the pile.
“OK, I think we’re finished.” I shrugged as Seb was loading the towels into the trunk. “Are we going to go now?”
“Yup,” Ahren said. “Now who’s going to drive?”
“I will,” Mer stepped up, grabbing the keys from me. “We’ll get there faster if I drive.”
“Or we will die in a fiery crash,” Dan chuckled. “I know about that lead foot of yours.”
“Ha-ha-ha,” Mer rolled her eyes. “Very funny!”
“I’m kidding, I’m kidding,” he said with a sly smile. “I know you’re a good driver.”
“Let’s stop fightin’ and get on the road!” Sara yelled in her southern accent. We took the hint and started climbing into the van. Mer hopped into the driver’s seat, adjusting the seat to her liking along with the rearview mirror. Seb took shotgun next to her, which is to be expected. Dan and Sara sat in the middle row of the van. Ahren and I took the last row to complete the set. OK, it's off to the beach!
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Sorry it took so long to update, I've been busy with ARC and everything else. I have more...but I want to add to it...so I should have that up soon.
Thanks for all your support!
Enjoy
Last edited by Casca : 25-03-2009 at 02:35 AM.
Reason: adding something
Insight on humanity
I think I might be addicted to Domo-kun. "Let's go to Tokyo!" Me:"Tokyo? But what about Japan?" "Mer, you idiot...Tokyo is in Japan." Me:"Really? Since when? OH...damn it..." "How the hell do you have an IQ over 170?" Me:"Oh, shut it!"
The trip wasn’t so bad. Mer had a CD of random songs she liked to sing to. Car karaoke is always fun with people like Ahren and Mer because they get way into the lyrics.
Dan and Sara embraced in the middle, whispering sweet nothings to each other trying to tune out the screeching duo. I would join them if I knew the song…but Mer listens to the most bizarre songs you could ever imagine. The Vomit is Just Skim Milk…who the hell comes out with that ****?
Before long, we were pulling into the parking lot in front of the beach. The boys took it upon themselves to retrieve everything out of the trunk.
“How bout you go and pick a spot to lay out on,” Ahren suggested. “We’ll take care of this.”
“OK,” I smiled. “C’mon girls, lets find a good place.”
We took off our flip-flops before stepping out onto the sand. Nothing is worse than the feeling of sand between your foot and sandal! We scanned the area until we found the perfect spot one-hundred feet from the lifeguard station.
“OK…this is perfect…” Mer babbled, stripping herself of her board shorts while making a mad dash for the ocean. “See ya!” Sara and I looked at each other and laughed.
“It really is impossible to keep that woman from the water,” Sara giggled. The boys joined us a moment later, with Dan glancing out at Mer in the water.
“Should’a known she was gonna do that,” Dan sighed, setting the coolers down on the sand.
“At least she picked a spot this time!” I exclaimed, “Last time she just ran straight in!”
“OK children, we should stop bickering so we can set up and join fish woman out there,” Seb scolded, setting all of the towels down. Once we finished, we made our way to the edge of the ocean.
“Oph,” I gasped, picking a bucket off the ground. “Mer is gonna want this.”
“For shells,” Seb said. “She loves that shell collection of hers.” She was walking into the shallows as he spoke. She had a couple of conch shells in here hands.
“Make sure no one is living in those, sweetie!” Seb called out to her.
She plopped down on her ass, examining the conch.
“There isn’t,” she cheered, placing them inside the bucket. “These totally beat mussel shells from the lake!”
We must’ve been at the beach for hours! Seb and Mer were busy shell hunting, spending most of their time underwater. Dan and Sara were being all romantic, writing love notes to each other in the sand. I decided to take the lazy approach and get my tan on. The ocean waves were so hypnotic, making it impossible for me to stay awake. I was drifting into dreamland…until I felt someone aggressively tugging at my bikini strings.
“What the...!” I exclaimed. Some shady creep was trying to untie my top. “Oh no!”
“Hey, get your slimy hands off of her!” I heard Ahren yell, running to my rescue. The stranger got startled and quickly dashed in the other direction. “Yeah, keep running!” He dropped down beside me. “Are you alright?”
“Yeah,” I said, breathing heavily. “The nerve of that jerk!” Once the initial shock of the incident wore off, I lied myself back down. “Do you think you could tie this back up for me?”
“How bout this,” I felt him untying my top completely. “You’re all stressed out from that guy, let me help you forget about him.” He straddled my back and began rubbing me down.
“Oh!” I moaned. “That feels so good!” His fingers were delicately yet progressively working every muscle in my back. Every ounce of stress was just melting off of my body like butter.
“Don’t stop moaning,” Ahren chuckled suggestively, his hands caressing my lower back. “It’s really starting to turn me on!”
“Ah!” I gasped, feeling my face turn red. “I can’t help it, ‘cause it feels too good!”
He continued massaging me for another twenty minutes before he tied my top back on.
“How do you feel, love?” He asked me sweetly.
“I feel just great, thank you so much!” I flashed a huge smile at him.
“Well, I’ll be right back, nature calls!” I kept smiling at him as he walked away. Once I couldn’t see him anymore, I let out a sigh and lied back down. Alone, I shut my eyes, imagining Ahren was still with me...
Suddenly, I heard a startling noise. My eyes shot open as I tried to get up…
I felt a sharp pain in the back of my head and fell back down…the last thing I remember was a shady figure throwing me over his shoulder…then everything went black.
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Last edited by Casca : 26-03-2009 at 07:18 PM.
Reason: I have issues with typing the word "she"...XD
Insight on humanity
I think I might be addicted to Domo-kun. "Let's go to Tokyo!" Me:"Tokyo? But what about Japan?" "Mer, you idiot...Tokyo is in Japan." Me:"Really? Since when? OH...damn it..." "How the hell do you have an IQ over 170?" Me:"Oh, shut it!"
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! what happened to her???????
i need to know, why a cliffhanger
it's so well written, you have got me hooked and i'll probably be checking back every 10 minutes or so to see if you have updated
We need never be hopeless, because we can never be irreparably broken
The wait is over! Now, there are a few warnings for this update. It is definetly more on the *ADULT* side, and I have a warning of a specific trigger before the part starts!
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Ugh, what just happened?
I don’t like this.
What the hell just happened?
Where am I?
Where’s Ahren?
Mer?
Huh?
I can’t move.
Why can’t I move?
I’m scared!
What’s happening?
I…I feel so defenseless!
Someone
Anyone
HELP ME!
My thoughts must’ve been going at least 1000 miles an hour. I felt a slimy sensation on the side of my face.
What the hell?
My eyes shot open, their gaze fixed into the eyes of a gruesome figure. I became immobilized by fear, tears forming quickly. As tears began to stream from my eyes, my captor tilted his head and laughed.
“Oh, is the wittle girl scared?” He laughed manically. I tried moving, discovering my arms were tied behind my back. I could feel my skin tearing under the bound rope.
“You’re just going to hurt yourself if you keep that up.”
Once my wrists started bleeding, I gave up knowing that I wasn’t getting anywhere. I just glared at him, my gaze full of anger.
“Wait…you…” I recognized that man from the beach. “You…that guy…”
“I see you remember me,” he shrugged. “I wouldn’t have to do this if it weren’t for that prick back there.” He lowered himself, now straddling my hips. “But this is so much better.”
He began molesting my breast with a rough hand. At that moment, I realized what he had planned for me. He pulled a pocket knife out from his back pocket, pulling the blade out.
******SEXUAL ABUSE TRIGGER******
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“There’s something about raping a beauty like you that really turns me on! “He chuckled, licking the side of the blade. He slid the blade underneath the strap of my bikini. I winced as he severed the tie. I tried struggling loose as he pulled my top down, exposing my breasts.
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“Help!” I screamed at the top of my lungs. “Somebody…” I was cut off by a large hand wrapped around my throat.
“There’ll be no more of that,” he spat, nicking the side of my face with his blade. “Do you understand?” I just glared at him as I felt blood flowing out of my face. A wave of fury brushed over him due to my reluctance.
“I said ‘do you understand me?’” He brought the knife to my neck. “Answer me, or your neck’ll be the next thing I cut.” I didn’t say anything…I just slowly nodded my head.
“Good girl,” he smiled, removing his hand from my neck. “Let’s continue, shall we?”
He slid down to my legs. “These look cute...” he tugged on the bottom of my bikini. “But they’re just gonna get in the way.” He severed them as well. I crossed my legs in a fetal attempt to protect myself.
“Christ,” he grumbled, separating my legs. “You are one stubborn ****, but don’t worry,” he ripped the fabric off my body. “I’ll loosen you up real good.”
I shook my head, tears falling from my eyes.
“Please…no!” I sobbed, shaking violently. “Stop…please!”
“Hmm…nope!” He cackled, running a hand over my snatch, causing me to gasp. “I can’t give up the chance to **** such a pretty, pretty pussy!”
He stuck his middle and ring fingers into his mouth, withdrew them, and thrusted them deep inside me. I felt a spark of pain run up my spine. It felt like I was being ripped in half.
“Well, what do ya know,” he beamed, withdrawing his fingers from inside me…covered in a small film of blood. “I just love virgins!”
He unzipped his pants, pulling them down just enough to reveal his member, fully erect.
“No!” I gasped…sobbing uncontrollably. “Stop!”
He just laughed at my begging, bringing himself to my pelvis. I felt him at the opening of my snatch. I could feel him adding more pressure…trying to gain entrance inside.
“Your **** is so tight,” he strained…adding yet more pressure. “C’mon! Let…me…in!”
I screamed in pain…feeling the head of his member which had just forced its way inside.
“Your **** feels so good!” He grunted. “And it isn’t even all the way in yet.”
“Take it out!” I moaned in pain. “Please!” He just laughed as he pushed more of himself inside me. I could feel blood flowing out around him. It was like I was being teared apart from the inside.
“All right!” He grunted, hesitating for a moment. “I’m all the way in. Nice and tight!” I just closed my eyes, trying to ignore the pain. I felt him bite my breast. “I want to hear you moan!” He ordered, roughly kneading my breasts. I just let out slight gasps. “Moan, bitch!”
He began thrusting himself deep inside me. He thrusted himself in and out of me, grunting wildly. I struggled as hard as I could. I sobbed, stifled by moans of pain. He got more aggressive, pumping faster and harder.
“This **** feels sooooo good!” He grunted. “I love how your pussy is wrapping itself around my dick!” I only caught part of that statement. I was starting to mentally and emotionally black out. I was hurting. I was exhausted. I want to die…
“Oh, yeah!” He grunted wildly. “I’m gonna cum! I’m gonna…”
I couldn’t even start to describe what was going on. I was fading in and out of consciousness…
I can only recall a few moments of what happened.
Mer was fighting my captor. Ahren was coming to my side.
I heard Mer yelling…and Ahren crying
“Cecilia…Cecilia?!” I heard Ahren’s voice. “It’s ok…everything is going to be ok!” I opened my eyes and saw him. He was holding me tight in his arms.
I faded out, and then back in…
“Mer…Mer!” I heard Seb yell. “Oh…my…God! Dan…get the van!”
Everything was going so fast...I couldn’t understand a single thing that was going on.
“It’s ok…you’re safe…” that was the last thing I heard before fading into unconsciousness.
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Well, I hope you enjoy it. Please tell me what you think...it took a bit for me to write it, I had to bite my lip and go with it...and I would really like to hear what you have to say.
Thanks for all your support!
Enjoy
Last edited by Casca : 01-12-2009 at 12:17 AM.
Reason: adding something
Insight on humanity
I think I might be addicted to Domo-kun. "Let's go to Tokyo!" Me:"Tokyo? But what about Japan?" "Mer, you idiot...Tokyo is in Japan." Me:"Really? Since when? OH...damn it..." "How the hell do you have an IQ over 170?" Me:"Oh, shut it!"
oh my god. poor cecilia.
thank god arhen and mer came to the rescue, i'd hate to think what could have happened.
you built up the tension really well, i was very scared for cecilia.
i really don't know what else to say apart from it it amazingly well written and worth the wait.
xxx
We need never be hopeless, because we can never be irreparably broken
Thanks so much! After writing that part...reading these comments make me feel a lot better. As I said in the beginning...parts of this story have happened in my life...and this last part was really hard for me to write...but I am glad you guys enjoyed it!
Thank you all, so much, for all of your love and support. It really gives me the will to write!
Thank you so much, loves!
Insight on humanity
I think I might be addicted to Domo-kun. "Let's go to Tokyo!" Me:"Tokyo? But what about Japan?" "Mer, you idiot...Tokyo is in Japan." Me:"Really? Since when? OH...damn it..." "How the hell do you have an IQ over 170?" Me:"Oh, shut it!"
One critisim, you use a LOT of dialoug throughout with a few passages of dence description. maybe you could write more descriptave passages and less dialoug. it m ight flow a little better
I know what you must be thinking: “How can a guy like me deal with a woman like Cecilia?”
Well, all I have to say is that I’m not a book. You can’t possibly begin to understand me just by taking one good look. I’m a complex individual. Don’t worry, I’m not about to give you this huge speech about my life because, quite frankly, I really hate talking about myself.
There is only one thing that matters: C.C. means everything to me. Always has, always will.
OK
Enough idle chit-chat.
I have to get back to her now…
What?
“C.C.?” When I returned to the blanket she was nowhere to be seen. “I was gone maybe five minutes. Where could she have gone?”
I know she could’ve gone to the bathroom or something…but there was something suspicious about this little spot.
Her sandals were still here and there was only one set of fresh tracks in the sand, and they were way too big to be hers.
I paced around our spot for a few minutes, becoming more nervous with each passing second.
“Where is she?” I asked myself, doing a quick spin to check the area.
“What’s with the pirouette?” I did a quick one-eighty and found myself looking at Dan, who had the biggest question mark on his face. “You getting’ ready to try out for the ballet?”
“Have you seen C.C.?” I asked, just hoping my gut was playing tricks on me.
“No…” He shrugged. “Why, is something wrong?”
“I have no idea where she is.” I sighed, getting more distraught. “She was here, and now she isn’t. All her stuff is here…but it’s like she’s fallen off the face of the planet.” I’m losing my ****ing mind! I can’t help but think she’s in trouble…
“WHERE IS SHE?!” I yelled, wanting to pull my hair out.
“Whoa, whoa,” Dan grabbed a hold of me, attempting to calm me down. “I’m pretty sure she’s fine. She can take care of herself.”
“What’s going on?” Mer ran up to us, concern written all over her face. I just stood there, hyperventilating, losing all sense of everything. “C’mon Ahren, talk to me!”
“C.C., I have no idea where she is…” I said, emotions running around inside me. “I can’t shake the feeling that something could be wrong.” Dan let me go and she wrapped me up in her arms.
“It’s ok, it’s ok.” She cooed. “Let’s get everyone together and we can look for her, OK?”
“Yeah…” I sighed, trying to calm down.
“Dan, do you want to get everyone else together?” Mer suggested.
“Yeah, and I guess you two are going to get started now?” He asked.
“Yes…besides, we’ll cover more ground if we split…”
“Help!”
The three of us looked at each other in sheer terror. That’s Cecilia…
“Somebody…”
“Oh, my, God!” Dan exclaimed. “GO! NOW!” Mer and I were sprinting before he even finished that sentence. Mer slid on her heels once we hit the snack bar.
“It sounded like it came from over there…” she pointed over into the myriad of office buildings. “Let’s go!”
I could feel tears falling from my eyes as we were entering the cityscape. I can’t believe this is happening. My worst fear is revealing itself with passion.
I just hope we can reach her before something terrible happens…
Yeah...I'm sorry if this update is a bit of rubbish. I was having so many problems with how I wanted to approach this next part. I hope it reads ok.
Please...let me know what you think! Your words give me the inspiration to write!
Enjoy!
Last edited by Casca : 06-04-2009 at 12:02 AM.
Reason: errors
Insight on humanity
I think I might be addicted to Domo-kun. "Let's go to Tokyo!" Me:"Tokyo? But what about Japan?" "Mer, you idiot...Tokyo is in Japan." Me:"Really? Since when? OH...damn it..." "How the hell do you have an IQ over 170?" Me:"Oh, shut it!"
Insight on humanity
