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Old 28-05-2010, 10:31 AM   #661
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havnt read this for a while but am still loving this!!!



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Old 29-05-2010, 12:38 AM   #662
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@#658:

Reminds me of the season finale of “House”, and:

http://www.biblegateway.com/passage/...-9&version=KJV

http://www.nachtkabarett.com/theThir...st/AmputateSin

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Old 29-05-2010, 11:23 AM   #663
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Wow really good updates



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Old 01-06-2010, 02:58 AM   #664
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I just found this for thefirst time tonight and have read it from beginning to end. Brilliant work1 i love how you weave the 4 strands in and out of each other gradually pulling the whole of the character together. Can't wait for more.

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Old 01-06-2010, 07:31 PM   #665
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these are really good updates I haven't read this for ages, I hope you're ok




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Old 02-06-2010, 12:33 AM   #666
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Chapter Thirty-Three

It is twelve fourteen. I am six years old. They let me go home, made me and Daddy promise to come back every week. She gets paid to do this; I reckon I could do it by myself. All she does is watch me draw things and play. Daddy does it every day. I don’t think I’m like most little girls. I think they think I’m weird. I wouldn’t really know, no one really talks to me about what girls are supposed to do. I don’t know if other little girls count as much I do. I don’t know if they all like to know what the time and date is. I don’t know if everyone is trying to hold onto all the time like I do. It’s just sometimes I close my eyes and wake up another years worth older.
I need to stay here. S’all.



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Old 02-06-2010, 01:51 AM   #667
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Very good :)



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Old 02-06-2010, 03:22 AM   #668
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love it!!



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Old 02-06-2010, 02:57 PM   #669
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it's still as good as ever!




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Old 02-06-2010, 03:00 PM   #670
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Good update :)



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Old 03-06-2010, 11:50 PM   #671
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Great update




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Old 11-06-2010, 05:14 PM   #672
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I've just read all this, and I have to say, it's just...incredible. i've got completely drawn into the story now, desperate to read what happens next! Also, I think you're so brave to continue writing this through your own struggles. I hope it's therapeutic for you. *hugs*

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Old 15-06-2010, 02:34 PM   #673
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I've just caught up too, it's brilliant!

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Old 27-06-2010, 02:08 AM   #674
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*bump* hope you're doing ok! Can't wait to read more of this.



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Old 28-06-2010, 10:42 AM   #675
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*bumps* again



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Old 27-09-2010, 06:09 PM   #676
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absolutely love this story! hope to read more :) x

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Old 04-10-2010, 04:07 AM   #677
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I'm hoping there's more it's so good!



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Old 03-02-2011, 07:32 PM   #678
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I just spent the entire day reading through 34 pages of 677 posts because your writing is just so amazing! I was hooked on this story from the word go and seriously think you have some amazing talent! I would be first in line to buy this as a book if you ever published it - a great piece of work! I hope you're ok and would be nice to hear from you soon xxx



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Old 04-02-2011, 03:06 PM   #679
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you have an amazing style, it's not over-complex or flowery but just really perfectly described, really nicely written. and it's really engaging, i love it

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Old 04-02-2011, 03:11 PM   #680
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might have to spend the next hour or so reading every page

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