“Come on Harper here is no place to have a nap.” Willow said helping my woozy body back up to a seating position on the chair. “I’m sorry I realise the talk of talking dinosaurs must be a bit hard to here when your not use to it.”
“You think.” I muttered putting my head into my hands and breathing hard to try and get the sensory around me to solidify. The process of course wasn’t helped when I spotted a woman at around the age of an angel 25 talking absentmindedly to a red Squirrel that appeared to be talking back to her in a Scottish ascent.
“Ugh why couldn’t I just die?” I groaned turning my head away as I saw a kangaroo skip in front of me.
“You are dead Harper. The doctor has just officially declared you dead and he is scared because he has to tell Danny that his little sister has just died and he is bigger then him .” Willow said smiling as she saw the image unfold in her head.
“I’m never going to be able to touch him again am I? I said sadly brushing my fingertips over the moving photo in front of me. “They don’t even know that I love them.” I moaned softly dragging my eyes away from the picture and looking to the floor a small pang of regret hitting me in the chest.
"The body faught to survive, it evacuated toxins in any way it knew how. It made clots to stop the bleeding.Bones would find the quickest ways to heal themselves. It made scar tissue. In the face of violence towards it, it would become violent. It was amazing, yet excruciating. "
wow
I could nearly say this is better than anything eles youve written..... though I actually cant diside.
vikki you are such an amaizing writer! This is brilent!!!
and If heaven ever happens for me- im wanting a talking animal!!!
Doing what you love can be the loneliest time of your life
A climbers day starts at the crux, getting out of bed.
“Never lose faith in yourself,
and never lose hope;
remember, even when this world throws its worst and then turns its back,
there is still always hope.”
Hay thanks every one.
As some of ypu know i am writing three storys at the moment so updates are not as frequant as i would like to make them but i will try my best not to neglect this on now i know pwoplw like it.
"The body faught to survive, it evacuated toxins in any way it knew how. It made clots to stop the bleeding.Bones would find the quickest ways to heal themselves. It made scar tissue. In the face of violence towards it, it would become violent. It was amazing, yet excruciating. "
“Your family new that you loved them Harper.” Willow said gently rising from her position behind the desk to reveal her full beauty. Her body was perfect. Dancer perfect with a bone structure any human girl would die for. It seemed unfair that Willow would be both beautiful and have a decant personality when I had none of the above.
“I think it is time to get you to your new home.”
“So I get a home then or are you going to tell me I have to build one or something? If so I want a really strong animal with possible thumbs and a DIY for dummies book attached to it somewhere.” I said also rising form my chair.
“Do you really think we would let you lose with power tolls Harper? You would bring down the entire universe of heaven in one go. No Harper you will be given house that suites you now and like everything else in heaven it will grow and adapt as you do.”
“OK sounds good, scary changing house. Where do I go from here then? Is it in walking distance?”
“Umm no. It is probably the distance between earth and the moon Harper. Heaven is a very big place.” Willow said laughing as she picked up the rest of the bibs and bobs off of the table.
“A really long walk then. I grumbled Shoving my hands in my jeans pockets. “Good job I have an eternity to get there.”
“Well if you want to walk be my guest but I am going to travel by magic door if you don’t mind. It’s a bit less strenuous on the old legs.|”
"The body faught to survive, it evacuated toxins in any way it knew how. It made clots to stop the bleeding.Bones would find the quickest ways to heal themselves. It made scar tissue. In the face of violence towards it, it would become violent. It was amazing, yet excruciating. "
A very nice story so far and an interesting concept. Just read the whole lot.
Don't be fooled by my smooth skin. The deepest scars are the ones unseen.
Remember compliments you received, forget the insults. If you succeed in doing this, tell me how..~ Baz Lurhman.
Letting it get to you - You know what that's called? Being alive. Best thing there is. Being alive right now that's all that counts. ~ Doctor Who "The Doctors Wife" 06.November.2011
Sorry it has been so long befreo updating again but i was working hard on another story and this one got put on hold, anyway i hope you all like the new update.
Nine
“Do I even want to know what that is?” I asked wondering if one of the many “magic” doors all around us would lead me right down to the fiery depths of hell; burning in eternal damnation seemed a little less complicated then talking lions and magic doors and I was all ready so tired with life, my death was meant to be the end of everything, not a strange new beginning.
“It’s just a door that transports you to where ever you want to go by telling it and then stepping through it, a very simple transport devise really.” Willow smiled opening the main door behind her desk to what just looked like a solid brick wall standing behind it.
“No, nothing to it at all,” I snapped rolling my eyes sarcastically behind Willows back, “Well not if your Harry bleeding potter that it is and I hate to burst your bubble but I’m all muggle.”
“You are very sceptical Harper.” Willow laughed over her shoulder as she stood on the edge of the door with her hand out behind her signalling for me to take it, which I did with a huff mostly because I had no idea where else to go, and that wasn’t mentioning the fact that there was a lady with a giant black talking spider hanging from her shoulder heading in are general direction as well.
“That’s because if we where still back on earth Willow and you where talking of Magic doors, talking lions and magic shifting houses you would be sectioned under the mental health act and locked away.” I said glancing over my shoulder again and internally breathing a sigh of relief as the spider lady turned off in a different direction.
“Well after what you just did to end you life you would have been too, so we are not all that different from each other then are we.”
Last edited by lost in dreams : 20-05-2011 at 08:51 AM.
Reason: Spelling
"The body faught to survive, it evacuated toxins in any way it knew how. It made clots to stop the bleeding.Bones would find the quickest ways to heal themselves. It made scar tissue. In the face of violence towards it, it would become violent. It was amazing, yet excruciating. "
Don't be fooled by my smooth skin. The deepest scars are the ones unseen.
Remember compliments you received, forget the insults. If you succeed in doing this, tell me how..~ Baz Lurhman.
Letting it get to you - You know what that's called? Being alive. Best thing there is. Being alive right now that's all that counts. ~ Doctor Who "The Doctors Wife" 06.November.2011
^ Grrrr, sorry my speling is just nasty *goes off and edits*
"The body faught to survive, it evacuated toxins in any way it knew how. It made clots to stop the bleeding.Bones would find the quickest ways to heal themselves. It made scar tissue. In the face of violence towards it, it would become violent. It was amazing, yet excruciating. "
Don't be fooled by my smooth skin. The deepest scars are the ones unseen.
Remember compliments you received, forget the insults. If you succeed in doing this, tell me how..~ Baz Lurhman.
Letting it get to you - You know what that's called? Being alive. Best thing there is. Being alive right now that's all that counts. ~ Doctor Who "The Doctors Wife" 06.November.2011
OK i realise it has been months since i have last updated this but something made me want to do it again so i did! I hope it's OK, enjoy
Ten.
“Ok that was insane; remind me not to use them again.” I moaned trying to suck in big gulps of air as Willow and my self solidified somewhere completely different then where we had been before. “I think after doing that I know why some people feel like kissing the ground.” I moaned
“They can make you a little queasy when your not used to them but magic doors are a major part of how Heaven functions so you will get used to them eventually.” Willow smiled before stretching, taking a deep breath and grabbing hold of my arm so she could start to toe me up the street.
As far as heaven goes the street that we now stood on looked almost average. There was the small exception that the sky was actually lilac rather then the more average blue that one expected and the houses where painted in a miss match of many different primary colours some with elaborate painting of different things on the front of animals, favourite cartoon character animals from back from earth and everything else in between however the all seemed to be an average size and where all “ uk semi- detached house” looking. The pavement we walked up looked distinctly average maybe with the exception that it was incredibly clean and the road in the middle was the same, that was if you could look past the fact there was a giant see through bubble driving up the middle of it with a giraffe sticking its head out the back.
“See Harper it isn’t that bad here is it,” Willow asked, “All pretty average and normal” She commented weaving at the person who was driving the bubble up the middle of the road as she went past.
“You realize you just waved at a driving bubble with extra room for giraffe in the same breath as describing this place as normal right?” I asked rolling my eyes
“That’s Quinn, I think she lives a few houses down from you, the giraffe is Stumpy. She is very friendly, I think you would like her, she is probably off to the observatory though right now but I am sure you will see her later when she comes back.”
“The observatory?” I asked. The place sounded almost normal, which of course means there had to be a catch.
“The place where you watch the ones you left behind, your expected to spend at least two hours a day there, the photo frame is just home work really some people like to keep an eye on there family when they are doing other things as well, and some don’t. I will take you there in a bit but for now,” Willow said coming to a stop and turning to face one of the houses, “this is where you will be living Harper.”
"The body faught to survive, it evacuated toxins in any way it knew how. It made clots to stop the bleeding.Bones would find the quickest ways to heal themselves. It made scar tissue. In the face of violence towards it, it would become violent. It was amazing, yet excruciating. "
Cool.and don't feel bad about taking so long between updates. You can't rush. Creativity.
Don't be fooled by my smooth skin. The deepest scars are the ones unseen.
Remember compliments you received, forget the insults. If you succeed in doing this, tell me how..~ Baz Lurhman.
Letting it get to you - You know what that's called? Being alive. Best thing there is. Being alive right now that's all that counts. ~ Doctor Who "The Doctors Wife" 06.November.2011
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