Daily Haiku Experiment

[dollpart]

Wolfspirit- I really like that

Fun With Till Equiptment Part I

The computip pen
trails glitter on my skin, then
fades like washed receipts.

[x-wolfspirit-x]

thanks dollpart i like yours too :)

[sweepingly]

I will smile for you
even though I'm so much more
broken than you are

[dollpart]

sweepingly,
i love that.

[Zanniie]

Through darkness they come,
Holding fire within their grasp,
To burn your control.

Through darkness they come,
Holding whips to break your flame,
Yet in you it lives.

Through darkness they come,
Holding chains to lock your light,
No locks hold your wings.

Through darkness they come,
Nothing but words on their lips,
This is what broke you.

Through darkness: silence.
Deserted you are shattered,
A mere memory.

A story of light,
Robbed by those who were trusted,
Dust is what remains.

Ok so I got carried away ;) Sue me.

[dollpart]

wow.
no, i won't be suing for that, that's really beautiful.

[dollpart]

i haven't written one in days... bad bad.

[sweepingly]

I love this thread so much. <3

I will smile for you
when yours begins to stumble
and dies on your face.

[dollpart]

School Run

kick crayon-waxy
leaves with new-scuffed shoes and say
it's nearly christmas

(it's an old one, still inspirationdry)

[dollpart]

loving all the replies

[Rubik'sCube]

Answers evade me
In fact there are too many
Repercussions halt me

Halt repercussions
Stagnation and discontent
sets in. Limbo remains

No actions taken
All potentially danger
Evil either way

Cycle remains fuelled
Self hatred the key contin-
-ually present

Answers evade me
In fact there are too many
Repercussions halt me...

I cheated a little with the third line being six syllables at times
The continually I split and carried over to the next line because it mirrors the word itself, meh, I cheated again lol

[dollpart]

*like*

Recycling

Rattling. Bottles
are sorted into greens, browns,
clears. Not so with me.

[dollpart]

sunday.

knives into the flesh
of veg, fingers crushing dough.
i'll make this perfect.

[dollpart]

spring

the days get longer
the days get longer the days
keep getting longer

[Rubik'sCube]

I like the picture painted and the expectation that gets changed completely as soon as we hit the word veg


I beg to differ
That is your philosophy
Dare I challenge that?

[dollpart]

earthworm

i almost tasted
light, beyond the soil. d'you see
now, why i kept craw
iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiling along, despite
iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiithe bad taste of the damp night
iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiitowards that tapping?
Up, into the mouths of crows.
not every earthworm's told, of
their tricks of rhythm.


**dont know WHY i wrote this, i really hate worms. *shudder*

[dollpart]

your stabs in the dark
wouldn't phase me half as much
if you had good aim.

[Zanniie]

Drag your feet across
this barren landscape of dreams.
Hope shall not thrive here.

Upon this dessert,
Independence means nothing.
Your freedom has gone.

Caging innocence
your tears tell of what is lost.
Write your life in ash.

But reborn again,
from the remains you burst forth,
to spit on their bones.


*love* x

[dollpart]

especially like the last one in that sequence. x

[silentdancer]

one lie leads to a-
nother, how can i turn it
back? lies are not free