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Old 12-09-2008, 05:17 AM   #281
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*waits for more*
this is wonderful



Even as the stone of the fruit must break
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Old 12-09-2008, 10:24 AM   #282
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I've been really useless at keeping up with this...sorry Alex...
But I spent a lot of time catching up and I'm otally in love and can't wait to read more...I hope Rosie's ok...




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Old 13-09-2008, 10:22 AM   #283
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Alex, its brilliant...

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Old 14-09-2008, 03:52 AM   #284
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Old 14-09-2008, 03:57 PM   #285
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Old 14-09-2008, 07:43 PM   #286
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“The good things don’t always soften the bad, but vice-versa, the bad things don’t necessarily spoil the good things and make them unimportant.”
“Nobody important? Blimey, that’s amazing. Do you know, in nine hundred years of time and space I’ve never met anyone who wasn’t important before.”
“If it’s time to go, remember what you’re leaving. Remember the best. My friends have always been the best of me.”

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Old 15-09-2008, 11:11 AM   #287
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Thankyou guys :) Lots and lots.
And Zed, don't apologise you silly thing! You kept me writing it in the first place!. x

//totally not at work...haha

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March 17th 2007

02:34

Lying on the floor he felt a trickle of sweat fall from his neck, although his whole body seemed to be shivering with cold. He could hear voices around him as he felt his legs being raised slightly and a cool glass of water pressed into his hand. "He's coming round now, how're you feeling down there?" Jack heard himself mumble a reply as he opened his eyes and made to sit up.
"Easy there soldier, you hit your head pretty hard on the way down, just sit tight and we'll have that seen to. You just fainted." His searching eyes clocked who was talking to him then, and they fell on a kind looking nurse kneeling at his feet. He saw his legs balanced on her knees as he felt the blood running from his feet to keep his vital organs functioning. On either side of him there appeared to be others preventing him from hitting his head again or, as he felt, preventing him from running away.
Turning his head slightly he felt a new wave of dizziness wash over and he shut his eyes once more, "Rosie", he whispered.
"Rosie hun? Who's that?"
"She's here. I have to be with her," he suddenly made to get up with a new wave of energy taking over his body, "Oh no you don't, Rosie can wait, you have to stay here for the moment."
"But what if Rosie can't wait? What if Rosie's holding on for me to see her alive one last time and i'm wasting that time now lying here?" The woman seemed without a word to say then and she paused, "What's her surname?"
"Griffiths, Rosie Griffiths, please I have to see her." It was then the turn of the woman's face to turn ashen coloured, "Okay," she replied, "I'll see what I can do"...


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"Be nice. Think happy thoughts. Champion silver linings. Love all things (not just cute things like babies and kittens) & when you do love - love like they do in power ballads (you know like on a cliff with the wind in your hair and your eyes shut, knowing you'll never know love like this). Watch out for dog poo. Smile at people - even grumpy ones. Remember anything is possible & whatever you do always try to look on the bright side."

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Old 15-09-2008, 11:16 AM   #288
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Oooo it's it's...the tension....please let her be ok....




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Old 15-09-2008, 11:39 AM   #289
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I love that you read that before i'd even editted the bits I didn't like :P



"Be nice. Think happy thoughts. Champion silver linings. Love all things (not just cute things like babies and kittens) & when you do love - love like they do in power ballads (you know like on a cliff with the wind in your hair and your eyes shut, knowing you'll never know love like this). Watch out for dog poo. Smile at people - even grumpy ones. Remember anything is possible & whatever you do always try to look on the bright side."

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Old 15-09-2008, 11:43 AM   #290
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another great bit :)



Even as the stone of the fruit must break
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Old 15-09-2008, 11:43 AM   #291
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yeeeeeesh!!!! more now... argh! don't leave me hanging alex!


*is brilliant* awesome story love!



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Old 15-09-2008, 09:51 PM   #292
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So gutted I missed this earlier.
Lovin' it.
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Old 16-09-2008, 03:38 PM   #293
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Oh please let her be alright.

I love this story, you are such an amazing writer



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Old 16-09-2008, 10:16 PM   #294
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alexxxx =[ no cliffhangerness *scowl* :P
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“The good things don’t always soften the bad, but vice-versa, the bad things don’t necessarily spoil the good things and make them unimportant.”
“Nobody important? Blimey, that’s amazing. Do you know, in nine hundred years of time and space I’ve never met anyone who wasn’t important before.”
“If it’s time to go, remember what you’re leaving. Remember the best. My friends have always been the best of me.”

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Old 17-09-2008, 01:34 AM   #295
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Old 17-09-2008, 02:26 PM   #296
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This doesn't really answer your questions... but I guess that's the whole point of stories.. hang on a bit longer eh.. <3

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December 25th 2001
06:30

The girl watched as her alarm clock flashed to 6:30am and the moment she was allowed to officially wake up. Rushing into her father's room she jumped onto the bed in anticipation of the day ahead.
He was alone there, his wife absent, lying still under the covers with the unquestionable scent of alcohol on his breath. She sat beside him excitedly, nudging him 'accidently' a few times to shake him back to the living, but after 20minutes of constant nudging her excitement had gradually dwindled to questioning, worry, and fear.
“Dad? Dad?! Dad, wake up dad!” She shook him now, the fear overtaking her body. “Come on Dad this isn’t funny!” The colour was slowly draining from her face as she realised her shakes were redundant to his unconscious form. As she shook him she remembered what she had been told in a school video, the memories flooding back, “If you find someone unconscious… head back… airways clear… onto their side… choke on sick…,” and repeating the words in her head, she followed the instructions rigidly.
The ambulance arrived not long after she had hung up, clear words of panic ringing in her ears, and as she watched them load him into the ambulance she wondered quite how many other 11 year olds over the world would be watching their fathers get bundled into ambulances on Christmas day this year…



"Be nice. Think happy thoughts. Champion silver linings. Love all things (not just cute things like babies and kittens) & when you do love - love like they do in power ballads (you know like on a cliff with the wind in your hair and your eyes shut, knowing you'll never know love like this). Watch out for dog poo. Smile at people - even grumpy ones. Remember anything is possible & whatever you do always try to look on the bright side."

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Old 17-09-2008, 02:35 PM   #297
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Oh gosh...oh my...oh no....
I luff you Alex
*feeds you nicethings so you'll write more soon*




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Old 17-09-2008, 02:48 PM   #298
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**needs a tissue to stop the tears** how sad!

Thanks for the update! xx



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Old 17-09-2008, 11:37 PM   #299
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