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10-04-2008, 06:39 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: Wales, UK
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Triggering (SI) - Razor Blade
"Why do you always cry so hard?"
I heard my Razor Blade say,
"Come; hold me in your hands
And I'll take your pain away."
Things feel so hopeless Razor Blade
And I don't have a single friend,
My heart has broken so many times
I don't think I can mend.
"Then I will be a friend for you
Just run me over your skin,
I promise I'll always be around
to release the troubles within."
"Watch the hurt leave your body
Inside each drop of blood,
I'll save you from the darkness
Whenever it begins to flood."
You've done so much for me Razor Blade
But people are starting to see,
Their words speak strongly against you
And they're really upsetting me...
"Honey, you don't need them
They just don't understand,
Dig with me a little deeper
And I'll take you to heaven by the hand."
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-Everyone leaves me stranded Forgotten, abandoned Left behind-
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11-04-2008, 04:13 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Norway
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Wow this is really good written. So well spoken, and it explain so much. Keep up the good writing.
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11-04-2008, 04:33 PM
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Gotta keep your face up.
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Brighton
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cripes!
powerful =D
x
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11-04-2008, 04:33 PM
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I put the 'fun' in dysfunctional :)
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: London
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I'm in total awe! Beautifully written.
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All the world's a stage,
and all men and women merely players.
Once you choose hope, anything's possible.
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11-04-2008, 04:47 PM
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I.want.to[[run]]and((Hide))an{{Never}}loo k.back...
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this is wondersful hun ^-^
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[</3]_And our scars remind us that the past is real I tear my heart open just to feel_[</3]
~*~I walked away because you were((hurting))((Killing)) me! [[not]] because i'm weak~*~
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13-04-2008, 12:16 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: England
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thats really good, very creative
i hope everythings okay
much love
x
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13-04-2008, 02:54 PM
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Why is the rum always gone?
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Berkshire
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Wow! gave me goosebumps that's powerful!
I love your style!
It's like, showing how seductive and addictive self-harm is for people...excellent!
=D xx
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<3JohnnyDepp<3 The history of the world, my love --
Is those below serving those up above!
How gratifying for once to know
That those above will serve those down below!
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13-04-2008, 02:57 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: scotland
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i love it! its so imaginitive
<3
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