Reviews Requested- Contains upsetting material - poem :)

[CBAatLife]

From start to finish I wonder why
The cuts look good in this messed up lie
The blood that trickles down my arm
People all stare at the guy who self-harms

"The emo" they call me
I turn to my name
They act out slicing their wrists
I hang my head in shame
I can't help my feelings
Of being alone
I hide myself for the day
Just longing to go home
I sprawl on my bed
With my razor in hand
And take myself away
To a much better land
I stare in the mirror
And let myself cry
Looking forward to the day
That I finally die

[nowhereman]

Aww hunni..I can really feel your pain through your words. Please ignore the idiots who make fun. Self harm is nothing to laugh about. You have a talent for writing, so try to focus on that. I can't wait to read more of your writing. Keep it up.

[felix felicis]

wow, there really is a lot of emotion in your writing! makes me just wanna give you a cuddle and tell you everything's going to be okay!
your poem flows beautifully - chin up!

It is beautiful <3