Reviews Requested- Safe - something I wrote

[Kelly_Lucile]

I'M GONNA DANCE by Kelly Lucile Carmer


The end of my life may be near, but I’m not going to live in fear.
They always say that we need to be careful, but I’m not going to wait till I get old.

I’m gonna run away from here; Never gonna look to the past.
I’m gonna stare straight at the sun; now is the time to have some fun, fun, fun.

Let me be me, don’t you see that I need to break free?
Give me this chance, I’m taking a stance, I’m going to dance…
In the freezing cold rain. I’m gonna fly, off a moving plane.

I’m gonna run away from here; Never gonna look to the past.
I’m gonna stare straight at the sun; now is the time to have some fun!

Let me be me, don’t you see that I need to break free?
Give me this chance, I’m taking a stance, I’m going to dance…
In the middle of the street. I’m gonna run with no shoes on my feet.

I’m gonna run away from here; Never gonna look to the past.
I’m gonna stare straight at the sun; now is the time to have fun!

Let me be me, don’t you see that I need to break free?
Give me this chance, I’m taking a stance, I’m going to dance…
Where everyone can see. I’m gonna do this for me!!!

I’m gonna run away from here; Never gonna look to the past.
I’m gonna stare straight at the sun. I’m gonna be me, and I’m gonna be free.
Just wait and see, see, see.

[Tig]

That's a fantastic poem, beautifully written. x