Reviews Requested- Contains upsetting material - Tracking life

[AtomicRevenge]

I tried to count my scars,
But I couldn't tell
Where one began
And another ended.

So I tried to count the cuts,
But I couldn't, because
Blood smeared across my skin,
Connecting them like a thin,
Red veil of pain.

And so I cried.
I cried a single tear, because
When I need to cry,
I can't.

Finally, I sat down,
And put pen to paper,
Or fingers to keys.
And tried to write my emotions.
But I couldn't, because
I don't know how to tell the world
What I feel like,
When I have no right.

I looked from the blood stained tissues,
Across my torn body,
Into my own eyes, reflected perfectly by the mirror before me.
Another tear was pulled from my eyes by gravity.
By this invisible force that makes me
Oh, so, miserable.

[Ailsa]

I feel like you're in my head... I really relate to this, good work!

PS. You do know how to tell the world, and you are allowed - stay safe xx

[Rynn]

This is really powerful. I agree with Alisa, it's like you're in my head. I can definitely relate. But you do have the right - to feel upset, to tell others how you feel, and to receive comfort and support. *hugs* Stay safe.

[AtomicRevenge]

Thanks =) Figured I'd post a short poem that I write everywhere I go

Ever Wanted?
Ever wanted to just curl up and die?
Turn off the lights?
Or kiss the world goodbye?

and on a side note, the first poem is called "I Tried"... Seem to have deleted the title and comment about it by accident...

<3