Reviews Requested- Contains upsetting material - My poems

[Kaylah]

We all want death

death because we cant handle life

Life is way to hard to deal with

some of us just want out



Life itself should be exciting

full of many new adventures

but to some, life holds nothing

except many nightmares and horrors



so to us unlucky few

death is the final way out

but like all solutions theres one fatal flaw

death is no exception



We want death to be the end

not the beginning






ok so please give me reviews on this poem. If you have any questions just ask, about the poem. It is pretty rough i know but im trying to perfect it. I just sort of spit it out. Thank you

[Kaylah]

Also any ideas you have for poem themes just tell me and ill see if I can write one and then ill post it here.

[Kaylah]

The world is chaos
Thats how i describe it
everyone going everywhere
with no system at all

but we as people like chaos
well that is most
we like a million things going on
Its how our life works

I dont like the chaos
There is just to much going on
I need to slow things down
so I can process them in my mind

what if I could stop the world from turning?
would anyone out there like me?
They would probably hate me
and run me out of town

But thats what I want to do
stop the world
Cause if I stopped the chaos
maybe I would be alright

[Kaylah]

Terrified
Thats all i am
no room for any emotions
or any thoughts

Terrified
One word says it all
Whatever you want to call it
There's little I can do about it

Fear courses through my veins
I know there is no way to change it
So I dont even try
I just sit in silence as time inches by

I want and need to talk to someone
Except nobody is here
The people I want are miles away
So I have to deal with fear myself

We have fear every single day
fear of the monsters in the closet
Or the ones under the bed
They are silly and worthless

Real fear comes to me
No monsters with fuzzy fur
This monster will last and never leave
I have this real fear

It isn't fear of the unknown I have
Its fear of the known

[Kaylah]

The trees are silent
There's no more sound
Nothing matters
No matter how big or small

Standing there in the silent wood
Trying to understand
confused and worn down
scraping for worth and meaning

Help and safety seem far behind
passed a million miles ago
no hope for the past
no hope for the future

suddenly there's a hand
a hand so gentle but strong
Putting a weak one in the strong
Confusion is destroyed and a life is saved

[Kaylah]

Life is a circus act
dodging lions
jumping through rings of fire
doing our act perfectly

Perfection is key
without it we are failures
unable to perform the act correctly
unable to fit in with the rest

If you cant perfect your act
then you don't belong
don't belong in the circus
don't belong in society

People need to belong
without belonging we are nothing
nothing but souls flouting around
with no purpose in this life

To us who fail at our act
the time is drawing near
where we will have to chose to move on
And face our end so near

But don't be sad for us who fail
we accept our fate with gratitude
for being the failures that we are
we are the ones ready to move on

[Kaylah]

Juggle Juggle Juggle
that's all you must do
live to juggle
juggle to live

A ball goes up
a ball comes down
you must keep them moving
or they will fall down

once they fall down
you've lost it forever
no way of earning it back
or ever seeing it again

although you try
You drop a ball
you lose a friend
it's very sad i know

You cannot focus on that ball
it will become your destruction
if you focus on that fallen ball
you lose all your others

sometimes you can choose which one drops
and which get to stay
we must make sacrifices
with which we hold on to

Because a day may come
where we are left to choose
between a friend and our life
I hope its life we choose

[Kaylah]

twisting turning

never stopping
Everything is way to fast

small Big

doesn't really matter
It's always way to much

Happy Sad

show no emotion
never let yourself get caught

Run far away
Never turn back
Escape this nightmare
Before they come back

[emoskylady]

Love the third one :]