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Old 23-06-2010, 05:49 PM   #22241
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Sometimes Zed it's better to scrap the whole thing and start from scratch. Instead of trying to build on the poor material, build entirely new material.

Worked for me more times than I can count.

What you editing?



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Old 23-06-2010, 05:50 PM   #22242
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Hey Emma :)
I'm alright.
You?




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Old 23-06-2010, 05:50 PM   #22243
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Hey guysss...sorry I've been quiet...watching my new TV series addiction haha



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Old 23-06-2010, 05:50 PM   #22244
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Hi Jade :)




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Old 23-06-2010, 05:51 PM   #22245
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what you watching Jade?



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Old 23-06-2010, 05:51 PM   #22246
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Hey Marie :) You ok? how was your nap?

&& Adam I'm watching Friday Night Lights



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Old 23-06-2010, 05:52 PM   #22247
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hey jade :)
the whole house went quiet for a bit didnt it :P
whats the new addiction?
uh im having a slightly bad day. but its ok im fine.

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Old 23-06-2010, 05:53 PM   #22248
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Hey Marie :) You ok? how was your nap?

&& Adam I'm watching Friday Night Lights
Never heard of it. must be good if you got addicted to it though



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Remember compliments you received, forget the insults. If you succeed in doing this, tell me how..~ Baz Lurhman.
Letting it get to you - You know what that's called? Being alive. Best thing there is. Being alive right now that's all that counts. ~ Doctor Who "The Doctors Wife"
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Old 23-06-2010, 05:54 PM   #22249
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Hey Jade :]
Yeah, thanks.
And it was okay. Never really helped much, but eh :)




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Old 23-06-2010, 05:55 PM   #22250
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It's an American show about an American high school football team in a town in Texas where the sport is like really mixed in deep with the towns religion and stuff. Wanted to watch it for a while so thought I'd give it a go the other night.

Officially hooked. Season 1 boxset has been ordered :D



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Old 23-06-2010, 06:18 PM   #22251
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^ive only watched like one ep

mafiki =] <3 hows you
watcha making a draft of zeddeh?
i just woke up at 12 =p in my defense i fell asleep at like... 4 or 5 haha



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Old 23-06-2010, 06:23 PM   #22252
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hi heather :)
how you doing?
i woke up at 11.30 and went to bed at like 12. i fail at staying awake. too exhausted lol.

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Old 23-06-2010, 06:25 PM   #22253
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im... kay.
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its too hot to walk =[ fmll haha



“The good things don’t always soften the bad, but vice-versa, the bad things don’t necessarily spoil the good things and make them unimportant.”
“Nobody important? Blimey, that’s amazing. Do you know, in nine hundred years of time and space I’ve never met anyone who wasn’t important before.”
“If it’s time to go, remember what you’re leaving. Remember the best. My friends have always been the best of me.”

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Old 23-06-2010, 06:26 PM   #22254
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im fine.
its cooled down here now at last :)

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Old 23-06-2010, 06:36 PM   #22255
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lucky :P



“The good things don’t always soften the bad, but vice-versa, the bad things don’t necessarily spoil the good things and make them unimportant.”
“Nobody important? Blimey, that’s amazing. Do you know, in nine hundred years of time and space I’ve never met anyone who wasn’t important before.”
“If it’s time to go, remember what you’re leaving. Remember the best. My friends have always been the best of me.”

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Old 23-06-2010, 06:45 PM   #22256
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nope i was wrong. its still hot :(

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Old 23-06-2010, 06:52 PM   #22257
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Sometimes Zed it's better to scrap the whole thing and start from scratch. Instead of trying to build on the poor material, build entirely new material.

Worked for me more times than I can count.

What you editing?
The Asian Perspective.

I'm trying to go with a different angel n it but there are still bits and pieces from the first draft that I want to keep and meddle about with.




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Old 23-06-2010, 06:54 PM   #22258
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aaaah. =]

*curls up in hug room and yawns*
i dont wanna get lunch *whine* theres like nothing here o.o



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“Nobody important? Blimey, that’s amazing. Do you know, in nine hundred years of time and space I’ve never met anyone who wasn’t important before.”
“If it’s time to go, remember what you’re leaving. Remember the best. My friends have always been the best of me.”

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Old 23-06-2010, 07:04 PM   #22259
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The Asian Perspective.

I'm trying to go with a different angel n it but there are still bits and pieces from the first draft that I want to keep and meddle about with.
The Asian Perspective in a wonderful tail. However if you think it needs changing that's your right as creator.
if you think you can make the changes without a full rewrite then more power to you. Sometimes it's harder but more rewarding to do so.

The way I judge if a work needs a re-write or not is to read it. Since i write for myself I am the one I need to entertain. If I'm not happy with only the odd sentence here and there i make those minor changes. but if too much of the novel has problems then I scrap the project and start over. In those instances keeping the old work around is more of a hindrance because you find yourself looking back on it too much and the new work just doesn't grow enough.

The three rules of being an author: Write, read, rewrite.

in my opinion, any improvements made will just be polishing the gem



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