poem-untitled at the moment

[x__elegantlywasted]

your words were
fleeting as the wind and
your heart along with them
whistling and twirling 'round
the mountins peak
with touches
so faint
so light
and whispers
promising return


comment/criticize/suggestions?

[Tweetyluver07]

i like it.. you could add more to it but you wouldn't necessarily have to.. i think its beautifully written..

[x__elegantlywasted]

thanks :)