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Old 26-03-2009, 04:49 AM   #1
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Possibly Triggering - Poem I wrote.

MASK
by me

She sits and listens
jsut like she's supposed to
Or pretends, at least
she hasn't actually listened
in a long time
It's all she's ever known
No one to understand
the pain
the lies
all the tears she has cried
covered up by a mask
"the girl that has it all"
they don't know what it's like
with this pain inside
eating you alive
inside out.



"Hit me like a ray of sun,
burning through my darkest night."



[[no longer trying to stop.]]


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Old 26-03-2009, 02:11 PM   #2
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i really understand that



why cant i be free

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Old 26-03-2009, 06:02 PM   #3
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That is superbly written, it actually sent a shiver down my spine. thanks for sharing!






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Old 27-03-2009, 01:30 PM   #4
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you're such a wonderful writer... I love this one as well. again, it relates to me personally.



Everyday they go to sleep hoping that when they wake up it'll be different... and everyday they wake up to see that hope is not there...
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Old 29-03-2009, 03:29 AM   #5
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this one really hits home.

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Old 29-03-2009, 05:31 AM   #6
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thanks guys. i have more i will post.



"Hit me like a ray of sun,
burning through my darkest night."



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