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26-03-2009, 04:49 AM
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Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: Minnesota, U.S.
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Possibly Triggering - Poem I wrote.
MASK
by me
She sits and listens
jsut like she's supposed to
Or pretends, at least
she hasn't actually listened
in a long time
It's all she's ever known
No one to understand
the pain
the lies
all the tears she has cried
covered up by a mask
"the girl that has it all"
they don't know what it's like
with this pain inside
eating you alive
inside out.
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"Hit me like a ray of sun, burning through my darkest night."
[[no longer trying to stop.]]
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26-03-2009, 02:11 PM
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lady arya
Join Date: Aug 2008
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i really understand that
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why cant i be free
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26-03-2009, 06:02 PM
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BECKY!
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Staffordshire, England
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That is superbly written, it actually sent a shiver down my spine. thanks for sharing!
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27-03-2009, 01:30 PM
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Make Love, NOT War.
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Virginia
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you're such a wonderful writer... I love this one as well. again, it relates to me personally.
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Everyday they go to sleep hoping that when they wake up it'll be different... and everyday they wake up to see that hope is not there... Make Love, NOT War.
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29-03-2009, 03:29 AM
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Join Date: Jun 2007
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this one really hits home.
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29-03-2009, 05:31 AM
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Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: Minnesota, U.S.
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thanks guys. i have more i will post.
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"Hit me like a ray of sun, burning through my darkest night."
[[no longer trying to stop.]]
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