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Old 20-03-2009, 02:34 AM   #1
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Possibly Triggering - The Last Dreamless Dream

insted of cutting i wrote this. tell me what u think.

The Last Dreamless Dream
The Night I dreamed that Dreamless dream
Is the night I watched as u walked away
As days go by and the nights grow long
A memory of what was begins to fade
A bright little girl who once was
Is now a little girl unsure of what to do
She sits alone at night and thinks of y this has happened
Y did he not choose her and love her but choose them
She wishes the pain would stop and wishes the tears would to
But yet again she sees only one way out
A small sharp blade that she can use to replace the pain with something new
As she pulls her pant leg up and begins to cut she feels that new pain
It says that she is alive but she wonders for how long
She feels so dead inside as she dreams her final dreamless dream

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Old 22-03-2009, 03:52 AM   #2
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i think its a wonderful poem. i can relate to it a lot personally, so it hits me in the heart. i like it. you're a brilliant writer :)



Everyday they go to sleep hoping that when they wake up it'll be different... and everyday they wake up to see that hope is not there...
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