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Old 16-12-2011, 01:22 PM   #1
SunshineSoldier
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I walk along
These empty streets
Ive walked them
A thousand times
The fuzzy feeling
Doubt rushes in
Im Lost again
Where do i go?

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Old 21-12-2011, 01:41 AM   #2
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I liked the ending with a question and I liked the 'F' sounds with Fuzzy Feeling. I thought it was clever that although you've walked the streets a thousand times, you're still lost. I hope that one day you'll be able to walk down the familiar roads and know the quickest way out without getting lost and trapped in that place. *hugs*

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Soon... Now will be then...Today will be yesterday... Present will be past...And thought will be memory... So...Live for the future! Make your future how you want it!

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